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Description

Everything is falling apart. On top of that, it is Halloween which means another year without Dad to take me out to haunted parks and binge watch classic horror movies. Could it get any worse? Oh, yes it can.

Our water is out. Again. But when my mom gave me the news, we discovered that someone is looking out for us.

Information

Status
Completed
Year
2021

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.6/ 5.0
Followers
5
Views
562

Chapters(1 total)

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Community Reviews(3)

  • ErdosRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    This short about loss and remembrance steers clear of elaborate characterizations. It is really just a few relevant scenes arranged into an impression. In that way it does a good job with the space it has; things do stay simple, though.
    Something to start one thinking and effective in what it aims to do.
  • Mary MoonRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    This  short was so engrossing for me because I could relate easily to the main character. I've been in her shoes, and she was portrayed very weii. This was a unique story, and left me wanting more. I enjoyed the first person style, and grammatically the story was excellent. I am new to this author, but I'm already hooked. Excellent!
  • RznRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    The opening is a bit long winded, and seriously, who doesn't know how to stop the pipes from freezing after it happens multiple times, but I digress! This is a good short story that has a good emotional element, it does not really resolve anything, but then again it is not supposed to. This is all about the odd connections and things that are beyond our ken. It was nice.