The Phoenix Hero [DROPPED]

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Description

A young girl's trading caravan is attacked. Her parents sacrifice their lives to protect her. As she is hiding, the Hero's Seed within her awakens. The spirit of the previous Hero guides her on her journey to become a Hero in order to stop others from experiencing the same loss that she ever did. Akiza is one of the few female Heroes to ever exist in this world, and this is her story. Follow her on her journey as she tries to enjoy the world and become strong enough to face the Demon Lord

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2015
Author: crazieaznkid

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.9/ 5.0
Followers: 121
Views: 179,194

Chapters(75 total)

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Community Reviews(4)

RakshasaRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
starts rather cliché, gets better
something dark is living in our hero’s soul – nothing is set in stone
short but frequent updates, keep it up!
DeathDragoonRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
I will continue to read to see if you improve like the first 20+ chapters. I would go into what bothers me but, truthfully it's annoying to do so if you even believe me it doesn't mean you're going to go back through the chapters to correct it or change it since you would basically be changing your story to a point.
Nevermind I just went back to the top read your note about possibly changing it anyways. This will be long and possibly irritating.
First she should be around the age of 9-16 to this point in the story. After she realized her parents were dead it should have matured her and instead she's still acting like a 9 year old or so frankly acting like a child even though her parents were murdered one of them practically infront of her even though she couldn't see it.
Let's see what else ohh her training with the old hero she fought using her speed and wasn't as rash, but after you left the grove/her home of a year or so she became stupid and impulsive and aggressive when she fought using brute force instead of her speed and agility which she trained with the hero, and she was semi intelligent in thinking of how to fight and study the hero but you didn't use that all in tell basically chapter 60.
What happened to Akira and the demon side of her they are both intelligent enough to talk to her but haven't at all.
You made her nearly op in tell chapter 30 something then not only made her slower mentally you made her so weak that I was about to actually stop reading and not because you made her weak but basically stupid. I liked it until then.
FluffyFlowerRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
no offence but the whole *hero goes on a journey to defeat evil * thing sounds cliche as hell.
IbzAhmedRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
Sorry but that summary is too cliche for me.