The Painter

Self-Published

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She was a seemingly ordinary girl in her late teens. She had many friends. She crushed on boys. She got into trouble. You know – the standard stuff. However there was one part of her she couldn't quite bring herself to share with anyone. It was by no means something bad but the girl felt that this part of her was something deeply personal. On some weekends she would go to the grand woods all on her own for day-long trips. There she would soak in the beauty of nature and try to capture this in her drawings. It was on one such day that she disappeared.Unintentionally lured to a portal to the spirit world where her real body perished, she found that she had been born into the wrong dimension. Her spirit would therefore be unable to stay in the spirit world. She would have to be reborn because she didn't live the life she was supposed to in accordance to Fate.This is the story of her new life.(the gender bender and romance will first show up later in the story )____________________________________________________________________________________With that said I would like to say thank you for trying out this fiction of mine. I look forward to a lot of constructive criticism! There may be a few grammatical errors, but I will try my best to catch them before I publish any chapters. English is not my first language so I may also unintentionally put in some weird idioms. Please bear with me. (Or better yet – correct me!)

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2016
Author
Brise

Tags

ACTIONFANTASYADVENTUREMARTIAL ARTSROMANCE SUBPLOTGENDER BENDER

Royal Road Stats

Rating
3.7/ 5.0
Followers
38
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4,763

Chapters(3 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

  • melissa^^Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    please don't drop this novel
    it's really really good
  • TasonRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    The style so far is very smooth and flows nicely for anyone reading. 4 stars due to nice work.
    The story is still very much new but for me its already great beyond thoughts simply because we have an artist who creates beautiful images and the thought of what she may be able to create in her next life with magic added into the equation just has me excited. Still only two chapters so I'll have to stick with 3 and  a half stars for now with solid intention of changing it down the road when more chapters appear.
    Grammar has been great so far with very nice work on writing and its forms and sentencing. Giving a good 4 and a half stars as it is very nicely written.
    The character so far, just two chapters, is well expressed in the short time so far so we do have some idea of what/who she is. Still just two chapters and we have more characters to see so for now I'll stick with.....hmm, was going to say 3 and a half but in regards to how nicely the author has done so far with the other characters I'll go ahead and give a four star for now.
    Very excited to see what the author may bring about in the future as well as what choices they'll choose to create in there story, but most of all I'm just happy to come across a story with an artist in it like this one so far has.
    4 Stars for now, will change  in future with more chapters and growth.