The Overspace Magus Emperor

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2025

Author

CherShootX

• Another New Story!
  Jun 21, 2025

Reviews

Community Reviews(6)

• Arashi ZarosRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  The setting is interesting, nearly the type of novel I like (kingdom/base building, crafting/invent or more like unlock new tech,...), although there are a bit more typos, at least it readable, and the author really active, quite friendly and willing to take feedback while also edit any error that I have point out, he also considering some realistic factor that most typical isekai novel tend to ignore or forgot, there are not much chapter right now (at chapter 7 and waiting for more) so I can't judge more.
  At least the release is quite fast, so waitting for more here :3
• muhammed yasirRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  Isn't this same story as mechanical God emperor, I mean starting is 85% same but I hope it's only starting because of the concept of story is same as MGE.
• LooseLeafOolongRoyal Road

  ★★★ 3.0

  First the good parts:
  I believe the author is trying hard to improve his/her writing and I like that if that is the case he/she is focusing mostly on one character. That makes the story much easier to follow. The premise of the story is actually interesting but I found myself struggling to dig it out of the setting and dialog.
  The number one thing detracting from this novel is the grammar, which is fixable with guidance and is enough for me to increase my rating later if fixed. However, as it stands I'm struggling not to be distracted by the grammar. I'm very fine with the occasional spelling mistakes or grammar mistakes but unfortunately these appear enough in the novel that it makes for rough reading.
  The second thing that distracted me was the occasional shift from first to third person narration. One of the two (presumably first person) should be chosen and stuck to.
  The third thing is the dialog. Characters speak like they would think rather than how they would actually talk. This is difficult for all writers but I see more often than not people in this novel are speaking their thoughts, not talking like they normally would.
  In essence, there is a lot of potential here: the idea of the story is interesting, the author has a good attitude and despite the grammar and narration issues the story is easier to follow than most novels. However, at least a fix of grammar and consistent narration are easy changes that would make it much better.
• fishsandwichRoyal Road

  ★★★ 3.0

  I actually enjoy a premise a lot, but the grammar is near unbearable. If you can get past the grammar, then it is not bad. There are still various plot holes, but that depends on how much you  are willing to suspend disbelief.
• toolazytobreatheRoyal Road

  ★★★ 3.0

  Yeaa that needs a lot of work . Sentence structure and grammar are not in the right place.  I always liked the idea where sf meets fantasy world that's why i started reading it, but everything in this story is simplified and generic. The characters enemies and allies are 2d characters. The MC really behaves as teenager so at least this is fine. I suspect that this story is written by one.  I'd say that it is  good outline, but not the story.
• QuisCustodietRoyal Road

  ★★★ 2.5

  First of all, I can't believe that anyone scored this story more than one star for grammar. The syntax is on the level of an early ESL person. I started counting the mistakes and I think there is one in every sentence. This makes it very hard to read because you are constantly trying to parse the sentence so it makes sense.
  That's too bad really because the story has an original premise. However, while the plotline is interesting it feels hurried, there needs to be more detail in some spots.
  The characters also need to be more rounded and fleshed out, they are somewhat 2 dimensional.