THE OTHER LIFE OF ACP

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Description

This is about a fat boy who is generally average in someway, dies on a home robbery. he met god, with an unusual apperance, and was able to pick reincarnation or, transportation. he picks transportation, but was not able to pick a cheat skill, it was already picked by god.

oh and i'll be updating this 1-2 times a week. like sunday to saturday. or at least i'll try.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2017
Author
Williamthegentleman

Tags

LITRPGFANTASYMAGICCOMEDYSTRONG LEADMALE LEADREADER INTERACTIVE

Royal Road Stats

Rating
2.9/ 5.0
Followers
150
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121,927

Chapters(32 total)

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Community Reviews(7)

  • TankdeathRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    Main character is good but the side character is like a filler that just "Fill in the role " for the future.Grammar please do better and have proofreader plz.There is no story just pretty much a adventure style and some random event.I hope there is no harem cuz it will destroy the purpose of the "Fat guy".I suggest that the mc will create a kingdom by using his code abillty to spawn some resources like stone,grass,equipment for guard,soldier and other releated stuff.
  • ultraliskRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    Greetings,
    There is no story so far, more like the main character is just enjoying his life, still the way its written is quite insteresting and makes up for the lack of a dedicated story, looking farward to the following chapters.
  • aishiyaRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    Hello,
    Will this novel update regularly or just for fun? Because For me I think its interesting OP MC not just in size and weight XD I hope that his character build does not change (I mean very rare the MC is Fat and does not change until the end)  so please update regularly, and another question what is the meaning of ACP?
  • Arashi ZarosRoyal Road
    ★★★ 2.5
    although the story is quite interesting,but the plot hole is literally everywhere ,and the author really need a proofreader,it fine for a light read though (spoiler):
    and why the hell the mc revive and make friend with "Arch Devil" just because his father was killed by him from a quest(and when the mc fight with the father,it clear that devil have killed and eating other people unless the people he eat is a bad guy),
    if author try the "he/she was a bad guy but he/she  actualy is a good guy" then you should have show the reason why he/she is a bad guy (right now or at that moment) and a signal that he/she is really a good guy ,There are a bunch of small inconsistencies and leaps of logic in this story,even if it a light read,at least it should have a simple solid logic enough ,but I not really see any legit one here ? [all of this just for a critical so not really offense here]
    I will edit it back after checking more chapter and after the author get a proofreader or editer
  • JazehiahRoyal Road
    ★★ 1.5
    Three strikes that made me quit before chapter 4.
    1) dialogue is written like it's a play. The meeting with God is so minimally described and the MC is so vain that I already dislike him.
    2) literally no content for chapter 1
    3) Infinite stats in everything? Infinitely fast skill aquisition? How does that fit the character? How does that leave room for character development? How does this not end with the MC getting drunk on, or afraid of his power? I understand stats are typically arbitrary, but what is infinite strength even supposed to mean?
  • wraith26Royal Road
    ★ 1.0
    im dropping this one.. this is a complete bullshit of a novel.. its feels ike reading a nonsense of elementary schooler.. wew.. just wew.. full of illogical nonsense.. not worth a time.
    mc is a naive idiot who i cant even explain if there is sonething wrong with him just that.. otherwise it interesting.. but the mc fucking destroyed it all
  • kay.lensonRoyal Road
    ★ 0.5
    what's the point of making MC naive, fat who sold his brain out...
    i mean you gave him OP cheat that's nice, but what's the point if you don't use well..
    can't just give himself skill like transform to change your body type..
    or give himself skills to boost his confidence rather than being meek always..
    at one point waiter throws him food & he just eat like a dog..
    so at the end, this novel is not my cup of tea..