The one who wield the darkness
Self-Published
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Description
a journey regarding an esper to another world.-ps-first time making my novel and english isn't my first language, so i am really sorry if i have made mistake about this.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2015
- Author
- gaakuizumi
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 16
- Views
- 3,862
Chapters(3 total)
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- KuerbisvakuumRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0I've read the the few chapters and can say YOU NEED A PROOFREADER or try to proofread yourself, sometimes there were wrong words like is instead of in or you were missing letters for example "hear" in ".... into the mothers hear and at ...." (Prologue).
Get rid of that and that can become a great piece. :-)