The One Who Fell
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
A creature born due to chance waiting for its demise on a dead planet fell unto a world of magic due to rifts in space.excited by this world being able to witness life once more in a world of fantasy and just how will it affect the world around it.(A/N the tags are there for when and if I decide to enter related content)
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2023
- Author
- AlexCyberHeart
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 5.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 5
- Views
- 1,793
Chapters(10 total)
- ch.10(Combat and Conversation)Apr 16, 2024
- ch.9(mysteries and cultivators)Apr 2, 2024
- ch.8(travels and wonders)Feb 24, 2024
- ch.7(home and consequences)Feb 17, 2024
- ch.6(disappointment)Feb 8, 2024
- ch.5(embarrassment and moving forward)Feb 7, 2024
- ch.4(Fear of isolation)Feb 5, 2024
- Ch.3 (Fear of the unknown)Feb 2, 2024
- Ch.2 (Elves)May 6, 2023
- Ch.1 (Descent)May 1, 2023
Reviews
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Community Reviews(1)
- Sentient_SockRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Although there are not a lot of chapters currently available, one (11 pages in total) to be exact, there is great promise shown in this fascinating fiction. I love the backstory given to us about the character and look forward to future interactions and activities in relation to them. But there are a few things which I find to be missing. That being grammar. Most of what I have seen can easily be fixed given a proof read or two, and the word choices could definitely be improved to provide a more vivid reading; But it doesn't take away from the story. This is the definition of a quality binge read if given a look over, and I see great promise in this fascinating novel!
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I will most certainly change this score to a pure 5 stars if what little is wrong in it is fixed, and even then, it is still a good read! I recommend it to anyone looking for a non-human lead, and likes the premise/idea of exploring their interactions with the world. This is truly a great start to a first novel! I can't wait to see what this ends up turning into by the end!