The One even Gods will fear

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Description

This is the story about a man... Who was betrayed countless times during his life... He ended it by jumping off a cliff. But what he didn't know was... He was going to be reincarnated. But not as a human... As a ghost who controls shadows... And who swore to take vengeance on humanity.Dropped for now.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2016
Author
Katsune

Tags

ACTIONFANTASYADVENTUREMULTIPLE LOVERS

Royal Road Stats

Rating
3.8/ 5.0
Followers
43
Views
11,785

Chapters(6 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • EnteryRoyal Road
    ★★ 1.5
    AT first, it looked like it had a potentional
    Character
    Characters seem so flat. They dont have any background, unique personality...nothing.
    The main character Rath isnt even doing anything bad. He is just killing bad guys and saving the innocent. The thing about taking vengeance on humanity isnt here.Rath is most of the time only helping people in need. He is also doing whatever the side character says and he acts like a puppet. Why? I really would like him to be in control. He was chosen by goddes!, This only makes him look like a guard dog. The thing about the love triangle was also weird. So they just kissed him and realized they can share him? What kind of conflict is that?
    Story
    This is the part im most disappointed at. I honestly dont see any kind of a story. It literally looks like he is just moving from one place to another and killing whoever looks like a bad guy. I really would like to know from what kind of world he came or at least i would like to know, why is he so OP. Magic, Martial arts or something like that aisnt explained at all.
    Grammar
    Grammar was ok. There may have been some mistakes, but who cares? Nobody is perfect. Just look at my review.
    Style
    Cant say much on that part, but i only didnt like things with guard #3,#4.... But i guess its a style, you have chosen, so i will bear with it.
    Overall, im pretty disappointed. I was looking for some good fanfiction with OP MC, who wants to purge/eradicate humanity. I really would like the things ive mentioned to get better and finally seeing MC doing some intersting decisions on his own and not being everything so straightforward.
    Neverthless, i will continue with reading and i hope the quality will get better.