The Normal Farmer
Self-Published
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Description
A normal person is suddenly summoned to another World. Upon arrival, a group of Mages, Guards and a spoiled Prince waits him. His status are pitiful and made him weaker than the average Farmer. In the second attempt, they summon a dog, a K9 German Sheppard Police Officer. Oddly, with low status as well.
Upon escaping the cave to where they were summoned, starts their new life in a strange, medieval, and magical World.
*This story is finished in ringdomstory.com*
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2020
- Author
- krushandkill
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- Rating
- 2.9/ 5.0
- Followers
- 93
- Views
- 12,605
Chapters(6 total)
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Community Reviews(5)
- claws8367Royal Road★★★★ 3.5Kinda hesitant to post this since it is the first review of the story and it aint a 5 star.
Disclaimer: read till chapter 3.
So first a few good points:
- The chapters are big!
- Was atracted to the summary of the story.
Now the things that irked me:
- There are some faults with the tense of the certain lines thru out the chapters i have read.
- The moment the mc became a white knight because a women got yelled at, disgusted me. And basicly made me drop the story, because i personally dont belief women should be treated better then men.
- Bit spoilerish: so i thought our mc was from present earth, but instead it becomes clear he is from future a colony? Sounds like something that should be mentioned in the beginning (though it comes up in chapter 3, but the chapters are long okey?!) And that brings up the point that this related to: while the author does setup the lore of world well. I in my opinion think he could do more about discribing the world around the mc and even the transitioning from one place to the other. (Though i might have skipped an alinea and may be in the wrong there)
Overall with some editing this would read well and smooth. Though i would still have problems with the mc being a white knight. - zimakovsRoyal Road★★★ 3.0At the beginning was interesting and got hooked up on it,but furthere in story it focuses more on relationship between EVERYONE, not just the main character. The actual story is good, but reading the sex life of everyone in the group isnt for me.
- JaimiRoyal Road★★ 1.5The author uses hyphens for quotes, instead of quote marks.
Quote marks should be used in English. I suppose it's not your first language, but that makes it very hard to read when you don't use quotes. Also, everyone has hugely long runon sentences also, like they are making speeches. You should break this up with some actions, and indicate the speaker more often.
This will make your story like 800x more readable. RIght now, it's only "somewhat readable, if you try hard".
Hope that helps. - BisasterRoyal Road★ 0.5It started out nice enough, if a little disjointed and lacking proper formatting but then the MC turned out to be a massive cuck, basically a dormat that is perfectly okay with his love interest fucking other people because he was unlucky with women beforehand or something. Hell, in the early chapters one character even tell the main love interest that the MC looks kinda fragile and needs love not fucking but then goes and cheats on him later with literally 0 guilt, with his own summon just to make it even worse, and the MC just says that it's the way of the world he's in and that makes it magically ok.
This needs a NTR warning bad, it was incredibly disappoitning when he gets cheated on and he has no reaction, he even supports the cheating while trying to stay monogamous himself. No idea how it goes past chapter 23 since I couldn't force myself to read any longer. - ZombunnyRoyal Road★ 0.5avoid this book its worse than 50 shades of gray