The Nine Stars

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2017

Author

FreakofGray

• Chapter 34 - Scene 4 - Survive
  Jul 1, 2018
• Chapter 34 - Scene 3 - Tree Mountain
  Jun 24, 2018
• Chapter 34 - Scene 2 - Archer
  Jun 7, 2018
• Chapter 34 - Scene 1 - Tower of Mirrors
  Jun 4, 2018
• Chapter 33 - Scene 4 - I'll take an arm!
  May 8, 2018
• Chapter 33 - Scene 3 - A Life for an arm?
  Apr 28, 2018
• Chapter 33 - Scene 2 - Flame Witch
  Apr 15, 2018
• Chapter 33 - Scene 1 - Against the clock + Plus Rune Art Piece + Announcement!
  Apr 10, 2018
• Chapter 32 - Scene 4 - Poisoned
  Mar 20, 2018
• Chapter 32 - Scene 3 - Seven Poison Islands
  Mar 9, 2018
• Chapter 32 - Scene 2 - Running Out
  Mar 8, 2018
• Chapter 32 - Scene 1 - Day Eight End
  Mar 4, 2018
• Chapter 31 - Scene 5 - Time Limit
  Mar 3, 2018
• Chapter 31 - Scene 4 - Skeleton abominations
  Feb 27, 2018
• Chapter 31 - Scene 3 - Luna Vs. Death Knight
  Feb 19, 2018
• Chapter 31 - Scene 2 - Death Knights
  Feb 15, 2018
• Chapter 31 - Scene 1 - Skeleton Wars
  Feb 6, 2018
• Chapter 30 - Scene 4 - An Oath to the heavens
  Feb 4, 2018
• Chapter 30 - Scene 3 - Thieves and Necromancers + Plan
  Jan 29, 2018
• Chapter 30 - Scene 2 - Graveyard
  Jan 26, 2018

Reviews

Community Reviews(4)

• Anime-SenseiRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  I don't know why I hadn't discovered this story yet...but I have to tell you it far surpassed my expectations. Every MC was better than I thought due to there either sad, epic or bittersweet beginnings. And if God would have it so, the same go for the endings. Because the stories that hit us in the feels like this one makes writing my own stories just that much more of an interesting experience. It fills my day with happy vibes and this stories vibes hit you harder than when I was punched in the face by Saitama.
• FireLebron23Royal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Amazing Story Man I would love to see more of it
• The Feedback TroupeRoyal Road

  ★★★ 3.0

  This review was done by request; it covers through the chapter ‘Chapter 7 scene 6’.
  Grammar: 2.5 - Rough, but it gets somewhat better.
  This story didn't really start on a good note for me, and a lot of that was from poor grammar and spelling. The second sentence has the characters 'donned in ragged patchworks', which is simply incorrect. As the story continues, it does improve; by the time I stopped, it was… better enough I wasn't continually distracted. It still had some problems, though, especially with punctuation/capitalization, tenses, and plurals.
  Style: 3 - Somewhat stilted, but understandable.
  I don't actually have a lot to say here, especially since it's hard for me to tell which of my problems come from style and which would be fixed by improving the grammar. I do think focusing more on clarity and brevity would help both areas; when I found myself confused, it was usually from convoluted sentences or oddly structured paragraphs.
  I will say, though, that the chapters in this story are either pretty long or pretty short, depending on if you consider the software-separated chapters or the title-separated ones. If I was reading this as a serial, I’d probably stockpile a few releases, and then read them all at once.
  Character: 3 - Somewhat caricatured, but not boring.
  The characters are, on the whole, pretty simplistic. They each have one or two defining features, and that's pretty much it. Not that I'm really criticizing that approach; on the whole, it worked. I didn't get them confused too often, because they all stood out pretty well. And they had unique names, which was helpful. On the other hand, they don't have much depth, either; Ren, for example, likes swords and booze. That's basically everything his character is about: swords and booze. Would I like more subtlety? Yeah, probably, but I can see how it would be difficult to do, especially given the size of the cast.
  Oh, and I'm including worldbuilding in here. It's about the same as the characters; fla
• Replica1Royal Road

  ★★★ 2.5

  Overall not a bad story. While many people seem to love having multiple MC's I personally belive that if an author cannot create a single character who the audience can fall in love with, or if the only way to further a plot is to have 100 people tell you what is going on in their own view, than the author has too much on their plate. I prefer reading from a few perspectives as possible and while more modern novels are making this a trend most great novels stik to a single mc with a few 2-3 other views sprinkled in to give the audience what the mc missed fue to bias, location, etc.