The New World: The Drowned Earth

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Description

In this new world, humanity faces great tests, full of danger and challenges.

Only by constantly growing stronger and evolving can we survive in this world.

Harry, a fortunate guy blessed by the goddess of luck, navigates this complex world with ease,  standing at the very top of the world.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2023
Author
MyShelley

Tags

LITRPGACTIONFANTASYADVENTURESCI-FISTRONG LEADGAMELITMALE LEADPORTAL FANTASY / ISEKAIHIGH FANTASYSOFT SCI-FIHARD SCI-FI

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Rating
3.2/ 5.0
Followers
38
Views
26,613

Chapters(48 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • madavocadoRoyal Road
    ★★ 1.5
    the author has created an interesting world; it's essentially a zombie movie, set in water world, with LitRPG progression.
    unfortunately it's extremely erratic with the actual quality of writing. the first ten chapters or so read well, but then it's like the editor gave up
    post chapter ten it starts reading like an auto translate that hasn't been checked; random switches between first and third person, strange sentence structure, and almost entire sentences or even paragrapghs missing connectives and determiners such as 'this', 'the', 'and', etc etc
    as to character and the like, we haven't seen any of that at all yet, it seems we are still in the introduction with MC non stop fighting off zombies and no time yet to see the bigger picture, i'm sure that will come with time
    for now, the biggest thing this fiction needs is a thorough editing process