One day, Blake wakes up in the body of a hummingbird in a mysterious new world. Follow Blake as he looks for a way to return to his human body and on the way conquers the world.

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SaulaceRoyal Road

★★★★ 4.0

It doesn't seem to be Litrpg, sadly. It seems to be more of a xanxia story, which isn't my cup of tea, athough I can't say it absconded with much of my time. I think it was about an hour for 22 chapters (and I read as fast as people talk). There's nothing wrong with that, mind you, as for a short read, it is quite entertaining so far. It's written simply, and the grammer seemed okay ( I don't recall any particular offences, so, way better than most around here :P ). Anyways, keep it up. I'll binge read every 10 or so chapters :)
P.S. I said there's nothing wrong with it, but I highly recommend slamming 5-8 chapters together and calling it one. When you're reading several stories, having to go back a few minutes into the read, to remember what's happening, becomes common. Depending on how often you release, that might mean having to go back more than one of your chapters, which is a major turn off, what with all the fiddling about. Having them a little longer seems to make the story flow easier between releases, as well (10 minutes of reading, sticks alot better than three). This is why I will binge every couple weeks instead. ...... Just a thought; It's still a fun read :)

uavgasRoyal Road

★★★★ 4.0

This story about a cultivating hummingbird is quite amusing and interesting. Even if the chapters are very short, I would like to encourage anyone who likes the stated story types at the top of the page to check it out. Keep up the great work, sibirmacek!

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