The Necromantic Scholar
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
Sabastian Shephard had just finished high school. He was the top student in the School for the Talented and Gifted in Dallas, Texas, one of the foremost schools in the country
However, having his title of best student and his girlfriend stolen by his best friend, his life fell apart
Travelling to Europe with his party of friends in a long pre-planned trip, he stumbled into a dark power,
This power led him to a path of the arcane, changing his life forever
How will he use this mysterious power?
This is his journey into the arts of necromancy
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2022
- Author
- Liampark
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.2/ 5.0
- Followers
- 5
- Views
- 1,489
Chapters(6 total)
Reviews
No reviews yet. Be the first to share your thoughts!
Community Reviews(1)
- The OxRoyal Road★★★ 2.5When I originally made this review the fiction was broken. The author had pasted his prologue chapter into the synopsis. I gave a very low rating and left this review to explain the low score, as I feel leaving anonymous low ratings below 2 is a dick move.
Now I'm stuck with reviewing the fiction at two chapters since the author fixed the upload mistake. This is way earlier than is reasonable to assess a novel normally but here we are. There are a couple things I don't like so far.
First, the dialogue is awkward and forced, very unnatural. It's hard to like any characters because they talk like programmed animatronic robots.
Second, the MC is the worst kind of "step on my testicles, please!" doormat weakling. This is a very popular trope from Japanese light novels and anime, but I personally can't stand this type of character. His best friend and his girlfriend were sleeping together behind his back, while simultaneously his best friend cheats by bribing a teacher to take MC spot as Valedictorian. What does MC do? Nothing but a little mental whiny "poor me" dialog? Why even go on the Euro-trip?
This loser needs a complete personality transplant. Based on the title he is going to become a necromancer, maybe he can raise a girlfriend from the dead, be less likely to go out on him.