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Aphids, ants, beetles, and bees...Creepy crawlies of every type always fascinated Matt.After his death, instead of reuniting with his lost loved ones, Matt is reborn as a Dungeon core.Determined to make the best of the situation, Matt decides to create the Dungeon of his dreams and others’ nightmares.Welcome to the Dungeon of bugs.

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Elliott AndersonRoyal Road

★★★★ 4.0

like I said it starts off odd but so far it's consistently good, not super but much better then some of the junk on the internet. Just think of that guy we all know who is waaaay too into their hobby then give them a dungeon and you get this story.
To the author, remember that writing probono is for fun, if it takes a ramble and 5 chapters to get started and some of the readers get butt hurt and hate on you remember this is infinitly better then what they could write. Brush off their 1 star drive bys, just keep trucking. Finger Guns

Ult the DreamerRoyal Road

★★★ 2.5

Much better. Though there's still a few misspellings and the occasional odd bit. The work is now readable and the sentences are good.
Far more character building is involved too.
I'll be reading more later.
I'd still recommend rereading your work before posting though as the main issue still present seems to be autocorrect. 2 typos ended up with "corrections" as madrid and some type of protein I had to look up to confirm it made no sense.

Shadow13Royal Road

★★ 2.0

Felt that the begining has a very slow start but also feel that the story has a lot of potential.
Can't wait to see what happens when he starts making several floors and evolving insect monsters.
Also looking forward to when invaders or adventurers encounter some interesting insect monsters and/or unique insect rooms.

The CubeRoyal Road

★★ 1.5

Full title: Dumb and rash MC meets unhelpful and rude system, tragedy ensues.
This only spoils only to chapter 2 as I just lifted my comment from there but still:
Also, yea he is DUMB! So his opinion were:
!!!THE ULTIMATE SHIELD!!!
Physical
Emotional
Elemental
Mental
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And he chose WHAT THE ONE HE TRIED TO PROTECT AGAINST SAID and IGNORED REPEATED WARNINGS! The All-purpose shield specifically said that it protected against mental, why did you ever show us these options? To cement that he is dumb? To not give him any more points so he can’t get the All-purpose one despite trying so he can get into all kinds of WaCkY sHeNaNiGaNs for plot development? Look at book dungeon. It’s currently a shooting star (I actually got here from it). In it our character only started but despite being weak he already has an overpowered protector that basically would have been this shield. He still needs to encounter an energy type to block it and you could spin it as him needing to be hit with it, leading to a revelation in a later chapter where he throws himself (softly) into the wall to gain physical defence, or burning himself over a fire to get fire elemental resistance.
Also, stories with snarky system don’t often go far, and if they do it’s because of some quirk that still puts the MC at the same level of power or humanises it. For (personal) example: a Manhua where a medical computer gets logged into a medical student’s brain.
Power equality: can’t actually do anything on its own and listens to what MC says (Despite being demanding and bratty)
But people still didn’t like it so they added:
Humanisation: It LOVES good food. It shares its senses with MC and after a visit to a good restaurant is now partially obsessed with good food and money (for even better food).
If you want people to read you ether do a twist early on, or you scrap everything and try again. Just chat chapter 2(Correction: 1) is enough to turn me away, and that’s NOTHING on chapter 3(Correction: 2). Correction

The Natural Dungeon of Bugs

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