The Mountains Of Versailles

Self-Published

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Description

We all have defining moments. These are the times in our lives we often reminisce about times we were proud of, or accomplished great feats. This was not one of those times.A quick warning from me before you read! This story has broken characters. They all have flaws and none are perfect. The MC can't fight, he's only a human just 18 years old. As it is tagged with mature you should also know that suicide, while not a core theme plays a part in the story. Abuse both mental and physical as well. Also, I make some really stupid jokes.What do Earth's morals mean in a world where killing is easy? When Bran is tricked by an uninformative and unhelpful goddess he is taken to another world. How will the weak Bran survive in this world without any cheat skills, or even knowledge of the basic human language? Can he possibly find a reason to even try to stay alive in this strange new world? These are all answered in the completely original, no-holds barred story: The Mountains Of Versailles.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2016
Author: BrandKayen

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.6/ 5.0
Followers: 12
Views: 22,991

Chapters(17 total)

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Community Reviews(3)

SpartanLokiRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Little early to review but we are about 7 chapters into the story so I decided why not make a review for it. Honestly I am enjoying this story a lot, the story right now is pretty light with humor but there is also more of a dark side of it at some points. The main character Bran is a bit weird in that he doesn’t view things similar to others but all in all he is a nice character, meaning even if things didn’t go his way he didn’t change from being a generally (if awkward) nice person. Don’t fully know where the story is going at this point but looking forward to finding out. I shall read on!
P.S. Sorry I'm so terrible at giving reviews, definitely not something I am very good at.
Mr SirRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Alright, my third review ever!
Style is very good and flows very well. I find myself hardly ever having to re-read a sentence or not understanding what was said. It is very easy to understand and does not require you to be a genius to read. That being said , I took of one star since I found some things got explained a bit too vaguely. I think the story will really improve once more details are added to certain things.
Story: I like it, a bit of the twist to the usual. However this rating is subject to change as the story progresses. I cant really comment on this without giving a spoiler, but I enjoyed it and will keep reading it whenever I can.
Grammar: Is awesome. I hardly found any mistakes or typos as I read it, there are a few of course but they don’t deter or take away from the story in any way.
Character: The character is pretty weird and I could not understand at first why he was reacting the way he was, but the writer explains it very well later. I took away one star because like in the style I think the story would be way better if the writer adds a bit of more detail, especially to what the MC is feeling. The best thing about first person is how you can explain in depth what your character feels like and I feel he may not be taking advantage of that.
Suggestion: If you add some hints during the previous chapters before it leads up to that, you can give the readers a feeling of curiosity and also make them less confused and easier for them to relate.
All in all, a great story it just needs a little more detail to make it Awesome.
NuitBlancheRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
If you don't take yourself too seriously and are looking for something light-hearted between others dark stories, it might be what you are looking for !
The storyline in itself is messy as fuck but it is what makes its charm ! I found the story hilarious and plot-wise it might turn into a great fiction !
Grammatically speaking, nothing peculiar to note, generally everything seems fine !
Give it a try !