The Misfits of Alter

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Description

The world of Alter is a world of heros. People with powers granted to them for the sole purpose of killing demons. One of these people is David Thomas, a boy who can see a basic idea of the future. Another is Mindy Valentine, a girl with the potential to become a god, but has never had the chance to demonstrate her prowess. Their meeting is a coincidence, but one that may prove to change their lives for the better.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2019
Author: Amadufus Creates

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Rating: 3.8/ 5.0
Followers: 20
Views: 8,225

Chapters(18 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

ralRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Wonderful.
Please keep writing, miss author.
I enjoy it very much.
Maybe not everyone does.
But i do.
That's all i can say to you.
I'm not good with words.
But your writing isn't a pile of steaming turds.
It's literary gold.
That i will read till i grow old.
RyancostRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
Work on your spacing please. Conversation is a jumbled mess. Trying to to figure out who is talking to whom.
World building needs a little work.
Some depth to the characters. For example the cafe girl. How long has she known the guy?
The story though i like it a lot. Not a lot of romance these days in fictions. Usually fiction romances go from sparkly almost gay vampire loving super hot very poor girl.
So keep on writing. Criticism is good. Improve on what you have. 3.5 star since i am still at beginning of story