The Misadventures of 5 Summoned Heroes [Isekai, LitRPG]

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2023

Author

Robotech275

• 7) Slithering Trouble
  May 10, 2023
• 6) Failure Management!
  May 1, 2023
• 5) A speedrun of hot springs episode
  Apr 28, 2023
• 4) We forgor Tina
  Apr 16, 2023
• 3) Only Uno of us is leaving!
  Apr 12, 2023
• 2) Armored and Horni (it makes sense in context, I promise)
  Apr 11, 2023
• 1) The royal summoning to a new world.
  Apr 9, 2023

Reviews

Community Reviews(1)

• ZenobiaTayRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  Let's start with the plot. It was the best part of the story, it kept me interested and wanting to know what happens next. I think there's definitely room for improvement in terms of pacing, though. It felt a bit rushed and could have used more detail and explanation.
  In terms of writing style, I have to be honest and say that it wasn't the best. There were some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that distracted me from the story. However, I do think there's potential here with some editing and polishing.
  The characters were a bit flat and lacked depth, which was disappointing. I didn't feel like I got to know them very well or understand their motivations and desires. That being said, there were some interesting moments and interactions between them that kept me invested in their journey.
  Finally, I have to mention the grammar. There were definitely some issues in this area, which made it a bit challenging to read at times. However, I think with some careful proofreading and editing, these issues could easily be resolved. I would suggest the author looks at something like grammarly or ProWritingAid which will remove a lot of the punctuation errors.
  Overall, I think there's a lot of potential. While it may not be perfect, it's a decent read with an okay plot that kept me interested. With some work on pacing, character development, and grammar, this could be a really great book. So don't give up on it just yet!