The Midnight Bonfire

This was what I wrote five years ago in seventh grade, and I'm now posting it out as a sort of remembrance. The basic story involves a 12-year-old kid being kidnapped to an ancient mansion to discover mysteries of his past. The writing was very awkward when I look at it now, but there are still a few elements I really like, especially in how the story deals with family losses and the betrayal of friends. Again, the English is awkward, please don't be judgy :).