The Meritocracy

Self-Published

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Description

I am a poor writer in general, that being said, I do want to write and have fun doing so. It would be a great help if people were to read and give honest opinions on what I write. My grammar is also terrible at times and often pass right by me.

This little story is about when two different societies clash and the people caught in the middle.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2018
Author
cup

Tags

FEMALE LEADDRAMASCI-FIROMANCE SUBPLOTPSYCHOLOGICALMALE LEADSECRET IDENTITYCYBERPUNK

Royal Road Stats

Rating
3.0/ 5.0
Views
405

Chapters(1 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • 1Royal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    Another story from the perspective of the main character, except that the MC is a kid whose thoughts are harmful to the story, in my opinion. If an author is set on using a main character who is incapable of basic comprehension, there is third-person narration for a reason. Besides this, the grammer, spelling and formatting all seemed decent, although the overarching plot seemed quite bland. Overall, I was not very intrigued by this story, especially from the perspective of someone who doesn't understand any of what's happening.