The Master and his Bird

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2015

Author

RyRy

• Chapter 7 - The Lingering Warmth of Love
  Oct 1, 2015
• Chapter 6 - The Three Foxes
  Sep 29, 2015
• Spirit Ranking System + Teaser
  Sep 29, 2015
• Chapter 5 - The Pink Painted Claws
  Sep 28, 2015
• Chapter 4 - The Power of Connections
  Sep 28, 2015
• Chapter 3 - The Spirit Academy
  Sep 27, 2015
• Chapter 2 - Friends & Enemies
  Sep 26, 2015
• Chapter 1 - Electrical Currents
  Sep 26, 2015
• Prologue - Life isn't always fair.
  Sep 25, 2015

Reviews

Community Reviews(10)

• AngelouRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Me want cookieeee... ME WAAAAANTTTTT MOAAAAARRRR~
• 3risuRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  Homestly, this is currently one of my favourite FFs. I feel it brings a lot of originality and is quite unique, though I did read some of the complaints about it being similar to another FF, which I also read afterwards and I guess there are some uncanny similaritties. But the stories themselves are actually quite different. Besides there are many stories on this ite which are similar, some purposely and some are complete coincidence.
  I found many aspects of this FF to be ideal and may have written something similart, had I never found this. This happens a lot so I think its better to not jump to conclusions and decide that the auther has compied anothers work without legit reason as most of is circumstantial.
  This story was really coll and I'd be really dissapointed if they stopped writing, since they haven't updated in a while. But I hope they don't drop it like other's which really annoys me to the bone. I mean they write and really good one then drop it out of nowhere, I pretty much hope that there are people out there that think the same. But I can understand if the auther is busy with life etc etc.
  The grammer id readable and there are no noticable mistakes. The characters have their own quirks to them some being a little cliché yet bring somethin extra special to the table with their interactions with the main character to the table.
  At the end of the day I think that this is the type of FF that many people love but will unevitably bring haters with it.
• Faolin93Royal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  From the chapters released so far I can say this is a great story overall. I was so glad to see that the prologue was unique, especially on this site, where you constantly see some average Joe die saving some random child, girl, or elderly person, just to be reincarnated as some OP demon lord, hero, or something along those lines. I was also glad to see no harem tag included. While I do believe that a harem could be a good thing for story/character development if done right I must also admit that it hardly ever is.
  Your MC\'s personality is also very likable. He doesn\'t just accept his handicap but works to overcome it, and although he is treated with disdain and pity by almost everyone around him he still has his pride intact. Your setting is also realistic, well as realistic as fantasy story can be anyhow. The way his parents just tossed him out because of his blindness is actually a very common practice throughout history and is actually still very common in a lot of places around the world.
  The only thing I can really complain about is spelling and grammar. Both were really bad in the first phew chapters but you have improved greatly in the more recent chapters. Overall, this is a great story and I hope you see it through to completion. I look forward to many more chapters
• ProxyRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  So Its still early in the book and a lot can change with how the author will write. So far though I am loving the chapters that have come out and the fact that unlike in other books you\'re taking your time build your character and his abilities as well as why he needs these abilities. I also like the fact that you don\'t start him to op, i mean sure his bird is op in his age group but based on the ranking shown it won\'t be him just dominating in school and watching the MC struggle can really help progress a book. Still its early and a lot can change but if the author keeps writing like he has been I wouldn\'t hesitate to recommend this to people looking for a good read
• Where's my heartRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  This story is definitely worth a read. 10/10 would recommend
• wonderRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  4.5 stars for chapter 1-6. The prologue is interesting where as the story itself it fascinating. It tells a story of an abandoned / outcast child and his path to the road of OPness.
• bunsambbstRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  May fortune befall u… Hi Mr/Mrs Writer… Thanks for the nice story… I think your effort in writing the story should be praise even though the story ain\\\\’t flawless but it\\\\’s still quite promising…
  For the character development, I do think you did quite a good job by describing the appearance and emotion but build a bit lacking in temperament and body build…but it\\\\’s not a big problem that can\\\\’t be solved with practice… If u do read a lkt of story u should somehow get the idea about what I\\\\’ve talking bout…
  For grammar department…. I\\\\’m very sorry , for I can\\\\’t give u some constructive review for this department…
  But u should be proud of the story line that you\\\\’ve come out with… A spirit bound with the soul…
  But I do suggest u to broaden your vocabulary and knowledge about writing stories…
  I think that\\\\’s all from me… but please don\\\\’t ever break down by a few comments that doesn\\\\’t praise u… because without criticism U usually can\\\\’t improve… Thank you
• StarlitRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  good work so far please post a new chapter soon i am looking forward to it
• AGemGoddessRoyal Road

  ★★ 2.0

  http://royalroadl.com/fiction/2217
  I mean the only difference would be the family still cared for the child, the brother angry at our MC and of course the powers.
  the main character's bind so he was abandoned by his parents, he then tries to become a genius eventually entering the same school as his brother. i may try to guess it was copied but since i still have no concrete evidence i'll call this a COINCIDENCE.
  And also, not for offence but what's up with that getting angry being called weak or being pitied? he got angry at his mother then the next day they're okay? someone explain to me that there was a reason for this.
  I AM NOT TELLING THIS IS NOT ORIGINAL BUT JUST POINT OUT THAT IT LOOKS FAMILIAR AND MAYBE OTHERS WOULD CHECK IT OUT
• unlockedRoyal Road

  ★ 0.5

  I really enjoyed the first 7 chapters and would of loved to read more.  However, it does not seem you are releasing anymore :[  Therefore, due to the inconsistence of the releases I SHALL RATE 3.5  (would of loved to rate it 5 stars).
  re: lowering It to 2 stars because it looks like you dropped it. :[
  Re:re: 0.5 stars now, because doesn't look like there will be more... :'(