The Masks of Under
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
The Masks of Under is currently under publishing contract! What you see here are the first few chapters of a finished six-part series. Thank you, everyone, for your support! "King of Flames," the first book in the series, is on sale now on Amazon and free on Kindle Unlimited.
If you read the original draft story here on RR, come join my discord (link in the first chapter) and PM me for a copy of the first book as a thank-you for those of you who supported the story!
Information
- Status
- Ongoing
- Year
- 2018
- Author
- Kat Kingsley
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.5/ 5.0
- Followers
- 397
- Views
- 14,934
Chapters(2 total)
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Community Reviews(10)
- BreyonItmayRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Love it. Really just love it. Wish there were more like it on RR
- CelsicaRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0I've been coming here on RRL looking for good LitRpg and easily digested day by day works. There's comfort in those. Most romances here are awkward at best, absolute shitshows at worst. The mythical elements in the description scared me off; was this the same bore as usual?
But wow, just wow. I was blown away
5/5 Style
The top peak of this website. Repetitions are almost inexistant, paragraphs, chapters, arcs all flow so smoothly. The cliffhangers are strong but not forced. Changes in perspective flow well and are done with purpose. No exposition dump. Good jokes even, natural dialogue. I can go on all day.
5/5 Story
Although the story is not my usual cup of tea, with romance being heavy, it is very very well crafted. The world is slowly exposed to the readers and makes sense without being too much. There's very clear progression, and no lulls in the pacing. It helps that releases are regular. Talking about releases, oh, the few sex chapters aren't bad at all either, quite creative too!
5/5 Grammar
I have not noticed a single error. I'm a quick reader, but even in the usual suspects for first place here I find a few snags. NOTHING. Is this a famous author having fun?
10/5 Characters
To lend credence to the theory, the characters in this novel are the standard that all should aspire to. They are all well defined, have a purpose and are revealed for good reasons. They have so much mystique, so much guts, well defined flaws. Most important, they drive the story. I cannot think of a single contender in that aspect around here.
5/5 Overall
TL;DR Whatever books you read here, give this a chance. I would not have been surprised to read this at my library in the top spot for young adult fiction. Extremely well crafted, a standard in using characters to guide plot.
Well done. The artist art is also great by the way!
If the author reads this, I'm hoping you just continue what you're doing. Make sure you don't fall into making the character too powerful, try to define what she - JPwritesRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Haters gonna hate. Just keep writing, finish the story, publish it, make money and get bitches.
50 characters, boom! - NorluanteRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Came to RR to read this by recommendation of a friend. This reads like a real novel. It's dark romance. Beauty & the Beast with monsters and horror. I love it. But it's not for everyone.
Pacing is a little slow at first. Picks up as you go. Incredible twists and turns in the story, really developed characters. Everyone is believable - even the ancient people the MC meets feel like they could be that old.
Noticed a few inconsistencies but nothing that can't be fixed with an edit pass. Same with some typos and grammar issues. Otherwise, can tell this isn't her first try at writing.
Highly recommend. Cant wait for more! - Quin4757Royal Road★★★★★ 5.0I skipped this over a couple of times because horror isn't usually my thing but I binged the first two books without realizing it. great story, great characters and im eagerly awaiting the next chapters as htey come out!
- Riendu8789Royal Road★★★★★ 5.0first book is paced slow, but that isn't bad imo. character development isn't a bad thing. story has great twists and turns. author has said that this is going to be a 3 book arc and we're almost done with the third one and i'm so sad to see it go. was lurking on this site but made an account to leave this review.
better than most things on rr. better written, sounds like a real writer, reads great. dark, gorey, has some great erotica in it. hope she writes more and this isn't her only story. - Sam4005Royal Road★★★★★ 5.0If you like romance in a twisted way and mysteries this novel is for you. The story is just great, really well written and captivating. Nothing more to say, just read it.
- XilyanaRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0The Masks of Under is a story that isnt for everyone. You will find very few like it online as darker romance tales are a rare thing. Even rarer are they as well written as this. It isnt often that you get a story online that is a well thought out and complete tale. Yes, the content will drive many away, but if you can look past it you will find yourself growing attached to the characters and their unique world.
Im into book three and so far it has been a wild ride of emotions. This isnt some hastily written fan-fic thrown together by someone. It reads like an actual book. Remember those things? - denkkarRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Horror/Romance are not genres I normally read. I couldn't be happier I gave this a try. The beginning has an excellent sense of realism and takes place in my adopted hometown of Boston. The rest of the novel takes place in an otherwordly plane that is absolutely unique. A harsh place that just squeezes out emotion at every sharp corner.
I am a bit disapointed that the novel ended without fully completing the cycle. Forgive the vagueness, I'm trying not to spoil here. I had anticipated this last bit quite hungrily, especially given the dynamics of a compasionate MC tempered by the realities of Under. - nevermorecallsRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5As I know the author has had to take down the story due to her publishing terms, I just wanted to share that I thought this was a very strong beginning. I will be checking out the book on Amazon. Best of luck to the author and wishing her all the best <3