The Man in the White Armor

Self-Published

Community Rating

Description

When two high school students discovered two watches of unknown origin, their lives were changed forever.

Impenetrable armor. Powerful energy blasters. Deadly energy blades. Artificial Intelligence strong enough to hack into any device on the planet. Potions capable of wresting with death...

This fiction has 14 chapters, all of which are completed and published on my Patreon. On Royalroad, chapters will be published every Saturday and Monday at 5 AM. It's Saturday because that's the weekday I'm writing this, and it's Monday because I know how tough the beginning of a week can be.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2019
Author: KR043

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.8/ 5.0
Followers: 15
Views: 7,509

Chapters(14 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

TimIsMyNameRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
At the time of the review other ratings are biased , this story from an experienced writer that made other amazing works that has only started with 4 chapters already has 2. 33 stars in ratings and the only other advanved review said "amazing job" and gave 3 stars . This story doesn't deserve a rating that i would associate with a harem power fantasy made by a middle schooler, so i inflated it.
The actual review
Stu
Style: is good, it's smooth and immersive. Can't say more.
Story: while the idea of teenagers getting isane amounts of power out of sheer luck alone isn't all that original, i trust the author enough that they will add bumps and twists to the story.(minor spoiler(3 chapters into the story) this shares the same world as some of the authors recent works, and i qonder why)
Grammar: flawless! Or at least this is what my non-native-english speaker eyes see.
Characters: are fleshed out and belivable, and in the 4 chapters behaved with common sense.
Overall
This is a great story with great potential, you should most definitely check it out.