The Magic Swordsman
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Clearing the most difficult mode of an RPG game called?The Invasion Of The Demon King?, Hiro Miyagawa unlocked a new difficulty, the?Hardcore Mode?.Pressing the "Yes" Button, a sudden white light flashed on the screen of the TV, forcing him to close his eyes. Due to the lack of sleep from playing the game three days in a row, Hiro fell asleep and reincarnated into Theo Regnard the moment he woke up.
As the support character of the game ?The Invasion Of The Demon King?, Theo Regnard was destined to die at the beginning of the game. Refusing this kind of fate happening to him, he resolved himself to become stronger and walk into an unknown road instead of choosing the supposed "Good Ending".
This is the story of a man who was cursed by the demon god, a story of a fallen prince who has chosen the path filled with blood and revenge, a story of a support character who became the main character, a story of the man called Theo Regnard.
Author Note
This is a slow-paced story and the first book that I'm writing. I hope that those who are interested in that book can find the enjoyment they were looking for.
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- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2018
- Author
- The Books Otaku
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Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.3/ 5.0
- Followers
- 48
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- 11,641
Chapters(7 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- flssddRoyal Road★★★ 2.5It's too short to judge it on the story so far, but it looks like a standard transported into a game world turned into reality. The MC has OP cheat skills and vast knowledge of the world and yet even more is unknown as he goes forward. The cliche of the story is not so important, it only needs one right element to make it stand on its own and above the rest and it may actually has that already. The realization is the hard part, we have to wait to see it.
But it definitely needs some serious editing, rearranging and rewriting. Many clunky phrases, unsound sentences, awkward descriptions, untimely infocuts, redundancy, typos, wrong tense uses and jumpy pov. The style and grammar are the problem things. It made me cringe in more than a few places and it's killing everything else.
Maybe english is not your first language and you can rapidly improve or maybe take extra time to polish it some more, but as of now this feels like machine/auto-translated. Sorry if I seem harsh, but it's just how I see it.