The Magic Of Mermaids
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
A downtrodden boy finds respite in an unlikely friend.
Information
- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2022
- Author
- Webbly Wobbles
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.7/ 5.0
- Followers
- 2
- Views
- 570
Chapters(1 total)
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Community Reviews(2)
- RznRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5This is a nice and wholesome piece of flash fiction that is worth reading. Some of the dialogue and the descriptions are a bit lacking or a bit awkward, some of the context I'd like to see if not present - but it is simple and it is focused. I got to appreciate a simple story without romance or an antagonist and have a hopeful message even if the ending was a bit unresolved - though it might just all be an analogy for a sudden departure of a friend.
- TealiciousTeaRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5A nice little flash fiction to relax with and a happy ending. At least I would describe it as a happy ending. Some minor style flaw, minor grammar overall it is fine. The story starts in the action and ends quickly. It leaves the reader wanting for more as some of the best flash fiction are want to do. A pleasant pair briefly met.