The Lost Ones

Self-Published

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Warning: Blood, Lots of killing and death, foul language and dark twisted humorDrake awakens not knowing who or what he is. Confused and lost he meets another, a girl in the same boat as him. Neither know how they got there or what has happened to them But they quickly realize they have tails and a strength they somehow know surpasses anything a human can do. As they experience the things they somehow know about, yet had never experienced, they learn just how their world really works.

Chapters(41 total)

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Community Reviews(5)

  • Ransac234Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I've been reading stories both published and amateur writing since I can remember and this story is just amazing both the concept and style in which the author presents his story. Most amateur stories I've read I wasnt able to get through because the way they write is either boring or uninteresting and I lose the motivation to finish their stories regardless of the plot but this story has kept me entertained and wanting more. The characters are unique and I love Alina for all her madness. Drake and Alinas relationship is realistic and not a fantisy. They have aruguments over stupid crap and make up amd genuinely  love each other. I definitely recommend this to everyone and I promise you will not be disappointed. And to the author keep up the good work and keep those chapters coming I just can't seem to get enough.
  • godmanRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I like the story ,the characters , and how the plot flows ,the mysteries , everything is just amazing specially the grammar of author is pretty amazing. I hope this novel gets recognized and the author continues to gives us a constant updates , also I am still confused whether the mc of this novel is Jason or Victor.
  • rctsjRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    im seriously impressed, keep going
  • Forgiv3n324Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    review at ch. 5
    Style is good, its not anything unique so not 5 stars, but not bad either so you get 4/5
    Story gets a 5/5 cause while there is no real set plot for now, there is a lot of potential for a really good story so unless you really fuck it up somehow its 5/5 for now :P
    Grammar is superb, but there are a few missing commas so 4.5/5 just to be a critic cause you are writing this to get better at writing yes?
    Characters get a 4/5 for now because well while they do have a set personality there are some things that haven't been explained yet such as why is Drake so volatile when it comes to combat? Cause honestly he has no real reason to be such an adrenaline junky. Also the chicks clinginess while in a way makes sense cause he is the first person she has meet since waking up and he also gave her a name, it is also a bit drastic in my opinion so unless further explanation is given as to the why's these two have such strong emotional actions for beings who aren't even mentally a year old yet its a 4/5.  (While I do know they got information implanted into them that is all it is, information not actual experience so...)
  • patcan3609Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    When reading this novel I can't help but to relate it to another novel, Heaven Awakening Path in that the MC's rely on each other for support and is a integral part in their lives.
    There aren't any outstanding grammar mistakes and the sentences flow well while having a interesting premise. A plot vastly different from what most fictions on this website presents therefore creating a fresh ambient while arousing interest.
    There aren't many chapters as of yet to decide whether the plot will advance in a stable direction. I can only hope for thorough explanations on the character's pasts.
    Keep up the good work!