The Lost City of Maeros (Working title)

Self-Published

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Description

Fen and her sister are orphans. A dead mother, a missing father. They make due. While her sister works to support them, Fen dreams of adventure, to board one of the great, flying ships and explore the world. But her birthday is coming, and the time for dreaming will come to an end.

A special necklace, a map and a message will soon send Fen out into the world in hopes of finding her father and healing her family. It seems however, that she isn't the only one looking for him.

NOTE - This is a Work in Progress/Early draft. I try to catch errors as I type, but more than likely I will miss some things at this stage. The primary focus is plot and story.

(Credit for Cover Placeholder: Artem Chebokha.Artstation)

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2019
Author
JJTaylor

Tags

FANTASYFEMALE LEADHIGH FANTASY

Royal Road Stats

Rating
5.0/ 5.0
Followers
4
Views
3,171

Chapters(8 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • Jordan StufflebeamRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    This story is a gem, and it is still in the beginning phases! That gets me rather excited! The biggest thing that I love that JJ Taylor does is his world building. He does exceptionally well at taking things that we have in our lives and changing how they work just ever so slightly to make it unique to the world. Its easy to follow and a nice add on.
    Futhermore, his characters are well placed and develope well through the chapters. you learn quickly who they are and their personalities and then they develope from there. JJ Taylor does a very good job at bringing conflict from the characters to develope the story, as well as to build up the characters.
    Fen is a likeable, adventerous teen girl who just yerns to travel with the ships she watches at the ports. Shes ruthless, strong willed, and overall just a fun character to follow.
    Grammar is sometimes a little weak at points but for the book being in its first draft its an easy fix and in no way detracts from the stories. He doesnt publish chapters as fast as some other books on here, but when he does they are well formatted and put together.
    Follow this book, and give it a read because it is an absolutle blast to read, and I am excited to see just how it developes.