The Lolicoknight

Self-Published

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Description

On a Sunday like any other, a message appears for everyone, counting down two minutes. With the short warning given, an excited man mentally prepares for this new world. At the end of the countdown, an RPG system descends on the world, shoving everyone into an unknown location, with no directions or guidance.

[participant in the November 2021 Royal Road Writathon challenge]

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2018
Author: Degritone

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Rating: 2.8/ 5.0
Followers: 75
Views: 74,478

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Community Reviews(2)

BobbokyRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Looks like a good idea but you really need to work on good formatting instead of just trying to be cool. it is impossible to use your formatting on my phone and is a pain in the but to use it on my computer. took a lot of joy out of an otherwise good story.
KashRoyal Road
★★ 2.0
The author needs to understand that while you want to bring in certain elements of the real world, as in the way you think to yourself or the way you talk to other people, into the story, that you shouldn't write the story like that.
Listen, I'm not trying to hate. But it's really difficult to immerse yourself in the story because half the times he breaks up a thought because the MC's attention is brought over to something else. I understand that this is something that can happen in real life and perhaps this is why the author intentionally incorporated this in the story. Or maybe it's not on purpose in which case the author seriously needs to improve their style. This is why I had to stop after just a couple of chapters.
Honest crticism, not hate. All the best with your story.