The Line of the Fall

Self-Published

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Description

Chester Vegner is the best soldier the BIC has,wakes up falling, plummeting through the sky of a planet no one even knew existed. A few seconds later, he’s crashing into a world teeming with bizarre, semi-humanoid creatures and medieval lunacy.

Will he forge unlikely friendships, conquer adversity through the power of camaraderie, and help those in need?

Hell no.

He’ll survive. He’ll manipulate. And if he has to, he’ll weaponize every freakish thing that crawls on this cursed land.

With only a bloodthirsty, sarcastic, and disturbingly curious AI named Mag as his unwanted sidekick, Chester is going to do whatever it takes to get back home. Mag, on the other hand, is just in it for the body count... strictly for research purposes, of course.

If you're looking for a hero, you've opened the wrong novel.

Chester doesn't do “good” unless there's a guarantee he'll be paid or feared for it.

Even this far from home, he's still chasing revenge. And he won’t stop.

Because the only thing keeping him going is one burning truth:

If they took away his light, he’ll become their darkness.

Even if there’s no one left to see it.

What can you expect from this novel?

- A detailed narrative

- A well-founded story

- A fantasy universe on realistic foundations

- A touch of sci-fi wrapped in a fantasy cloak

Chapters(20 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • Hannibal ForgeRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    I docked a star for grammar, but I have to say that the premise and world of Line of the Fall is starting out amazingly. Sariserpitt may have a winner on his hands if he can manage to clean up some of the punctuation errors.
    The setting is original, the plot is entertaining, and the main character, Chester, manages to stand on his own in a convincing and compelling way. I definitely recommend giving it a try, and forgiving the small errors in what is otherwise an excellent narrative.