The life of Jonathan the Dungeon
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Description
An ofice worker named Jonanthan, nicknamed Jon, has died by sliping on to a banana peal and falling down the stairs.He wakes up to find that his soul has become a Dungeon. With a game like sistem he tries to survive in a world with unexpected things.
WARNING, not nativ english speaker, soo a lot of gramar mestakes.
Pleas coment on mistakes.
Information
- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2022
- Author
- SnowGuardian
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- Rating
- 1.2/ 5.0
- Followers
- 9
- Views
- 1,540
Chapters(4 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- RznRoyal Road★★★ 2.5Seeing as the author identifies as an ESL (English as a second language) I am going to forgive the grammar mistakes and typos - and there is a lot of them. Going just on the premise of the story itself, there is really not much of an arc. The boxes are nice, the idea and the skills are laid out - maybe too excess for a beginning, but the problem is the narrative arc. It feels like the author might have found this difficult to write and then decided to wrap it up quick.