the life and death of me autobiography
Self-Published
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Description
Well a story is a story and since I could never trust anyone with mine. I have died trying to tell this story others have been injured just for getting a piece of the story. With enemies everywhere I look and very few safe havens. the times my soul has been destroyed I am incapable of counting. Oh did I mention time travel.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2017
- Author
- slackerjake22
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 2.5/ 5.0
- Followers
- 1
- Views
- 3,621
Chapters(4 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- GobsukeRoyal Road★★★ 2.5The story has nothing keeping you reading, and its missing any hook to draw you in. Not to mention, if you do end up reading on a whim like I did(Just typed a fiction number at random in the URL), it leaves you confused. The grammer's pretty bad, and the whole thing looks like a wall of text.
If you're story is just starting out, I think you should take easier topics to write on. Also, indent your paragraphs, and make them shorter, because this makes them look more appetising to the eyes. Make your chapters a bit longer, because people don't usually have patience to continously click next chapter. Capatalise titles, because those are the things that pull people in. No matter how good a story is, nobody likes to read a short wall of text, unindented, with a sloppy looking title. If just these 2-3 points are changed, I believe you can make a proper story.
Don't give up, you can do it.