The Lich beneath the city
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After the world ended a lich took over a city, he enslaved all of its inhabitants. He forced them to learn the evil ways of dark magic, and transformed them into Meta-Humans. Orcs, goblins,demons and many other corrupted and evil races were created because of his experiments. To this day the taint in out bloodlines can cause some of us to transform into these wicked creatures. This Lich was defeated by our glorious Church of white. However his evil minions walked the rest of the planet and they marched on this city. The gods saw our plight and created a turtle from earth and the bones of the heroes who died protecting us from the Lich and we ride upon that turtles back. His most evil creation a dragon still flies the skies plaguing our city making us unable to leave. People say he still dwells beneath us in the Labyrinth that is his Kingdom. The Lich beneath the city.I like short blurbs don't reveal as much about the story.**WARNING MATURE CONTENT**All sorts of stuff so don't get mad at me.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2016
- Author
- Lapisgollum
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 2.5/ 5.0
- Followers
- 11
- Views
- 8,976
Chapters(7 total)
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Community Reviews(2)
- SinikalRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0I'll adjust this later. I read what you've currently put out and from the prologue and the synopsis it feels like looking at two alternative reality history books. One in which Hitler won and the world praises his works. And, one in which well....America offhandedly won the war on their own. Did you mean to do this? Or, did you write the synopsis and then sit down to work on the story and decide to go a different path? Because it drastically alters the expected story if it is the latter.
There are other things but I'll wait untli the story is more fleshed out to update this review about those. - admiraRoyal Road★★★ 3.0The quality varies from chapter to chapter, but it's average to decent (using RRL as a standard). I'm hoping that the main story will be tied together with the prologue and description in the near future; for now it's just kind of confusing.
If this story continues, I'll adjust my review and rate it accordingly.