The Legend Of Michael
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This story is about a 15 year old named Michael. Michael is a prince of a great kingdom and also he is part of a Meta-human family. Meta-humans make up 37 percent of the world populations and most of the world. Majority of Meta-humans are female and also females are the leaders of the world, while the majority, of males, are slaves. Michael lives with his family in a palace. His kingdom run by his mother the true ruler of the country while his dad is just a figurehead to the country. Mostly everybody in Michael family is Meta-humans except his father. And Michael has nine siblings and out of those siblings only six are candidates to have become the new ruler of the country and Michael is not one of them. Michael wasn't upset at first but when he heard that he would make a terrible ruler for the country by his brothers and sisters. Michael becomes upset and demanded to be a candidate just like his brothers and sisters. *Author NoteThis fiction is a participant of theWriTEr's pledge.
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Author Note*
Chapter releases are Wednesday Thursday Friday Saturday
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2018
- Author
- Dee Williams
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- 4.1/ 5.0
- Followers
- 25
- Views
- 14,290
Chapters(21 total)
- Chapter 21 I WILL BE THE KING OF THE WORLD!Jul 5, 2019
- Chapter 20 Should I join the Revolution and become a true hero of justice?Feb 15, 2019
- Somebody is bombing the city! Chapter 19Dec 2, 2018
- My little brother just pimped slap me in front of our grandma! Chapter 18Dec 1, 2018
- Deces keeps getting in the way! Chapter 17Nov 30, 2018
- No moment last forever. Chapter 16Nov 25, 2018
- On a road trip with Salena for 9 hours. Chapter 15Nov 25, 2018
- I will fight my younger brother for Cherina soon! Chapter 14Nov 24, 2018
- My darling Cherina rather be with my little brother!? Chapter 13Nov 15, 2018
- My father's killer is still alive will fusion even be enough?! Chapter 12Nov 9, 2018
- I'm taking on my father's killer while fusing with my sister! Chapter 11Nov 7, 2018
- This demon will help me kill my father's killer. Chapter 10Nov 6, 2018
- I found out the family secret power. Chapter 9Nov 2, 2018
- My heart is broken into pieces. Chapter 8Oct 31, 2018
- I can't lose her... Chapter 7Oct 28, 2018
- My Father is K.I.A. Chapter 6Oct 5, 2018
- My sister will fight the second strongest sibling.Tyra V.S Astrid Chapter 5Sep 27, 2018
- The first round of the tourament.Who will get to the next round. Chapter 4Sep 20, 2018
- I was almost killed by my younger brother and oldest sister! Chapter 3Sep 18, 2018
- I want to be strong enough so I can kill my opponents Chapter 2Sep 17, 2018
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Community Reviews(2)
- Goddess WarRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Let me say this you can be a better writer than this. You keep rushing your chapters and it makes the writing not that good. I can say this The Story is great and I like the characters and theirs a developing romance that can take this story to new heights. I know it's hard to write the action that's where you struggling at so far but you can get better at it when the story keeps progressing. You need to listen to Venge and Luffy Monkey. They keep giving you advice, please listen to them. The only thing holding you back is the writing. To be more specific the description of the surroundings and the actions of the characters. Other than that I really like this story. But first, use your own writing style so I can point out where you went wrong. Now let me tell you what you need to do for the story. Cut out some of the action. And put more romance into the story. People will like to read that. Once your writing gets good enough you can put more action in this story but for right now put more romance than action for right now. Also, I agree with Luffy Monkey review. I would love to see character development in this story. Can you have Michael go on a journey with one of his siblings. That will develop a character. I like the tourament idea and it was enjoyable at the least, it could've been better. I don't how long you going to do the series. So I'm going to take a guess here and say that your story is going to have at least 80 chapters. If you at chapter 60 please revise chapter 1-6. Your story either can be one of the best or just good at the most. If your writing improves that will great and you will get more readers to read your stuff. I will read every chapter that you release and give you my thoughts on the chapter and I will tell you if your writing is good enough. I know that you sick of hearing quality over quantity, but it's the truth. Take your time and write a good chapter so I can see where you keep going wrong. Please stop being lazy at the end it's getti
- Luffy MonkeyRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0@Dee Williams, I have to say this you're writing improved so much that I'm doing another a review in a short time just to say this. The writing style, I was confused for the first six chapters but you turned it around by doing the first person point of view. You added more of Michael thoughts in the chapters. In chapters seven through ten. I was amazed that you didn't get lazy at the end and you were producing chapters at a fast rate without slipping in quality. In chapters 7-10 you develop a real sibling rivalry in a short timespan. You exceeded my expectation. And you producing chapters without making the story feel like filler. You really know how to write a great romance and slice of life story. Keep it up your story will be top ten someday.