The Last King

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2015

Author

Luc666-_-

• Chapter Forty-three
  May 20, 2016
• Chapter forty-two
  May 10, 2016
• chapter forty-one
  May 2, 2016
• Chapter forty
  Apr 29, 2016
• Chapter thirty-nine
  Apr 6, 2016
• Chapter thirty-eight
  Apr 4, 2016
• Chapter thirty-seven
  Mar 21, 2016
• Chapter thirty-six
  Mar 19, 2016
• chapter thirty-five
  Mar 18, 2016
• Chapter thirty-four
  Mar 17, 2016
• Chapter thirty-three
  Mar 16, 2016
• Chapter thirty-two
  Mar 15, 2016
• Chapter thirty-one
  Mar 14, 2016
• Chapter thirty
  Mar 13, 2016
• Chapter twenty-nine
  Mar 11, 2016
• Chapter twenty-eight
  Mar 9, 2016
• Chapter twenty-seven
  Feb 29, 2016
• chapter twenty-six
  Feb 26, 2016
• chapter twenty-five
  Feb 17, 2016
• chapter twenty-four
  Feb 16, 2016

Reviews

Community Reviews(10)

• AlcatrazRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  the fiction is  very original in its own way an OP character but not perfect , and perfect world  and characters
  the story is very emotional but it makes you smile to.
  I think the author is very talented and should keep up with story (at least for a few years !)
  well whatever only problem i think with the story the MC think to much between the conversations ! its not soo bad but it would be better without it . and need more interaction with people but i think the story is great.
  MESSAGE TO THE AUTHOR: I thank you for this chapter . and i hope you make more reunions specially ga....na ,  it would be not fair  .
• ArkhamRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Just found this story and what a gem it was. Previously only three stories on royal road had me hooked but now it's defo gonna be four. Everything I love in novel is there. The interactions between characters are good and really hope there are scenes in the future where we can see how truly OP the MC is.
  Although the grammar could improve slightly, and there should be more interactions between the MC and lilith and some other characters,  overall this story is awesome. Keep it up man, and hopefully you get to finish this story.
• SesamechiknRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Just wanted to say love your plan for the story and thank god no NTR. Wanted to give you a good rating because I enjoyed it and hope other people see it.
• sabazurcRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  This story has everything I want from action fantasy novel. It has OP mc, interesting world,good fights, different types of cultivation methods are presented and properly explained. There are many interesting figures from different mythologies and that makes this story even more interesting. though there are some grammar mistakes in earlier chapters, but nothing major. This story is very enjoyable to read, it is definitely one of the hidden gems of this website.
• HexwolfxRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  I really like this series its a good read and has a neat ideas. I hope to see who he has s-- with first, and also hope gos into details like re;hamster
• liuheiRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  good plot, op mc , the writing become better as the story progress
  overall good job writer :)
• ElectricIcecreamRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  Story
  As far as I know this is a new way to tell a 'summoned to another world' story, where the summoned being is not a human who is asked to defeat the Demon Lord or something. I agree with you (author) that the story is a bit too slow paced, but I've only read up to chapter 18 so far, so maybe you've changed that already, in which case, good for you. Even though I haven't read much of it, I can already see the story going in many possible directions, which is nice. So far there is no end goal in sight, which I miss, because so many stories have no such goal, making them endless, giving the author no change at all to finish the story and giving it a satisfactory end. So please give that a thought.
  Style
  You write mostly in third person POV, but also in first person. Sometimes you even interchange these completely different points of view, which is a bit disturbing. It has gotten a lot better since the earlier chapters where you started with 3. pers POV and then suddenly, mid-paragraph changed to 1. pers.
  Your story is also written in past tense, a style that goes well together with third person POV. However, there are occasions where you suddenly change the story telling to present tense, and I'm not quite sure if it's intentional. If you wouldn't mind spending some time to re-read the first five chapters of your story, you'll find several such occasions.
  Grammar
  Here's a list of things you should keep an eye out for:
  Apostrophes (')SpacingCapital lettersTyposLike all stories, yours contains contractions (two words pulled together - won't, doesn't etc), but your problem here is that you straight out either don't know or don't care about the apostrophe in these words. Have a look at your  earlier chapters and you'll find them riddled with such unnecessary mistakes. I checked the most recent chapters and saw that you've started using apostrophes now, which is nice to see.
  Mistakes in spacing is another important factor that many people find annoying to see in a story
• Forgotten LordRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  Damn the story is good but has to go Haitus. The way the story was shown is so gooood.The author also try to covered up the plot holes but I don’t think they affected the story too much, Or they did? Don’t know. One of the good thing about the story is that the characters aren’t one dimensional. Though the story don’t have good grammar that dosent really distracts you from enjoying the story. The story makes you laugh , sometimes sympathy, and various emotions. It is a well balanced story with a good plot and pace I would say but I wouldn’t say it dosent have mistakes so that ration goes 4.5
• PandaZzzRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  The concept of the story is good.
  You’ve got an OP MC who is stronger than even the most ancient of gods. However, he is only 19 years old.
  This is because after he reaches a certain age he goes through a reincarnation that he has no control over,
  losing his memories of his previous life. This causes him to have many relations with people across planes and worlds, which made me anticipate the reunions in the future.
  However, the problem is that to this point of the story, a majority of it has been info dumps after info dumps.
  There is little to no interactions between the MC and side characters besides Loki and Reina. Sadly, even Reina only interacts with him for about 2 chapters.
  You should probably involve the side characters into the world of the MC as well. Even the many students he trains are like automatons who don’t talk or say anything. There are only descriptions of them spreading rumors and talking about the MC. Descriptions on how the girls blush at him or the students being scared of him. There are no unique students, teachers, or characters that really spice up the story.
  At one point, you described a young, pretty librarian leading a group of students in the library Roland was currently in, but then she was quickly gone after a story of how those upperclassmen wanted to test the MC(new teacher) out after hearing the cruel rumors. Even a greeting would probably suffice, but there is none of that.
  Instead, of students just scramming should probably include even little quotes such as “KYAHH” or something that makes them have more personality.
  All in all, the story has potential and the concept intrigues me, but there is too much descriptions
  and little “story”.
  This is just my review after reading up to chapter 16. Up to this point, 15 and 16 are the ones that actually have dialogue after the conversation between Loki and Roland in the early chapters. Maybe you’ve already improved this shortcoming in the 48 chapters you have out now, but it just really fr
• KaellomRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  I've read up to chapter 7 so far. The story is a fresh idea, it's a mishmash of different mythologies, allowing you to play around with the 'supernatural' side of it as you like.
  The only issue with your writing is due to a lack of proofreading. I'm not even talking about Grammar, in the first chapter there are mistakes in punctuation and also spelling errors as well, not to mention the other chapters.
  Some sound advice I would give would be to read through your story and correct the mistakes you have made, if you can get someone else to do it for you that's even better (an extra pair of eyes spots more mistakes).
  You could also include some more characters, it's a bit boring when Roland is only talking to one other character, for instance introduce some more of the students in his class that have a variety of different personalities.
  Another suggestion I might add would be to add more detail to the scene where Roland meets the class he's teaching, you could have done so much more with that! Give a description of the students, what they looked like, what their reactions were too him, did they glare at him? Where they surprised when they saw him enter the room?
  All in all. this story is a raw diamond that needs a lot of polishing! But once that's done, this will be a top grade story.
  P.S. look up the difference between showing and telling in writing, it's useful info to know.