The Knightly Elven... Spider? [GL, litRPG]

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THIS STORY IS NOT AVAILABLE ON AMAZON.

Grew up an orphan and had to join the knights, swore to protect people so they didn't have to suffer what I did. Eventually succeeded at the cost of my life, and was offered a new life but there was a catch. I was cursed to become a spider, and now I'm just trying to find my way again with my first ever friend in a new world.Trying my hands on litRPGIt will have many of the same themes as my other story (Adventure, Fluff/Romance, Slice-of-Life, Progression)

Pacing may slow down at certain points and probably in the future so be warned.

Come find me and other wonderful readers! at : https://discord.gg/TqFjdv8uaE

Chapters(285 total)

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Community Reviews(10)

  • VoxolRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Overall: Overall I really enjoyed reading this, for me, this is a novel where I keep clicking that next chapter button until I run out, I think I spent two days finishing everything released so far.
    For a monster evolution story, there are many styles you can take, the feeling I get reading this is some high stakes early on that turns into a more laid-back slice of life story. I would love to see Cellestra and Kealyna enter dungeons in the future which may have been slightly foreshadowed in 1.61
    Style: I like how things are written, the only issue I find is the system boxes get cluttered with higher-level abilities and spells that I feel are unnecessary, this has only happened a small number of times, it really takes nothing away from the story and for some, you could argue is nice to see stronger versions of skills to unlock. If I am being vague I am talking about things such as Very Weak Ice Lance > Weak Ice Lance > Strong Ice Lance etc all in the one box.
    Grammar: I am not great when it comes to grammar, I have not seen a single mistake or anything jarring to read, 5 stars since I cannot find any fault.
    Story: An enjoyable experience, I don't think I have read a monster evolution (though I have not read too many yet) that progresses the way it does, it feels refreshing and unique for me, though it may not be the case for others I have enjoyed every chapter so far, there is also so much more to come until we start exploring the world and things start to take off.
    Character: While there has not been too much shown yet I think that this is a good thing, hell at this point of the story I am writing this review Kealyna has not even unlocked speech, how much backstory and character growth could be shoved down our throats to know everything at this point, while Kealyna does not have much motivation early on except revenge she seems to slowly grow out of it and wants to help Cellestra with her problems that have been slowly revealed.
    I feel like this Is well done, I want
  • ShadyTundraRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    the gl aspect is pretty slow, writer ain't rushing anything which is lovely. not sure what else there is to say other than it's a pretty daunting read due to the sheer amount of chapters there is. i'm not even out of arc two yet despite being roughly a thousand pages deep. overall a fun read honestly, definitely reccommend it, gonna have to check out the author's other works once i finish chewing through this.
  • Crystal Jade HardingRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I love this story looking forward to reading more Thankyou for the great read so far I'm half to see more spider novels they are hard to find especially ones that show a good light on them if you want any spider info I'll happily provide it as I used to breed them and I studied them for years
  • Uncle RetRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I find this story to be a pleasant light read.   The writing style is good and there are no glaring grammatical errors.  The story isn't anything unique or special, but it makes for a relaxing, lighthearted, feel-good kind of read. The main character is likable and the supporting character seems to have agency so far.  While the mc's progression is rapid, she hasn't yet become ridiculously overpowered and is still quite weak.
  • DeathunterzRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    One of the few good evolution stories out there. Give it a try it is def worth your time. Its really good, give it a try theres not much slow pace even in the begining.
    Basically mc starts as a spider and evolves to get stronger, sorta like that novel "I'm A Spider, So What?"
    Sorry I'm kinda awful at writing reviews but to translate for you: Good story, read it.
  • Mongolian1324Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    This is a fun read.  Nothing new here but that is not a bad thing. The leveling and evolution have all been done before but I like specing characters and it is fun to see how other people choose. The author is good at this kind of story. I am hopeful for where this story will go. Thank you for writing!
  • WaywardwizardRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    This story is so very sweet, the way the main characters act and treat eachother and those around them. The writing is occasionally amateurish however the content more than makes up for it. The worldbuilding is great, the characters for the most part feel real, and premise while inspired by similar stories sets itsself apart.
  • Nyx KatalixiRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Faragi is once more writing a novel that has me binge reading for hours and waiting impatiently for the next release! Most thankfully the wait is not long with frequent and abundant releases. I enjoyed the setup for the reincarnation Faragi gave and the explanation for the game/system elements at play as well (gods suck). Our protagonist already has depth with her past and we  are seeing a possible shift/addition to her motivations in burgeoning companionship. Quite honestly I'm most excited to see the romance that I'm sure is coming as I have full faith in Faragi's ability to make me squeal in excitement. Even with the expected romance the adventure and action scenes are more than plentiful and well written enough to keep me engaged and thrilled. I personally impress upon all whom are considering reading- do so. ❤️
  • PsofriendsRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    In the opinion of this reader, it is clear that this story is of quite high quality with a nice mix of action, character introspection, interaction between characters, humor that consistes of both verbal and slapstick, along with drama and mystery to round it out. The addition of utilizing not one but two different worlds neither of which are our own to form an interesting newer or at the very least, less used approch to the reincarnation genre of literature. It is yet to be seen whether or not family dynamics will play a major role in said story, however, it has been hinted at. The main character starts off will clear goals and so far has not lost those goals but it seems they may soon expand upon them or even outright replace them for a different noble cause. So far the cast has remained small with a concentration on the interactions between them. I however, have high hopes for an expanding cast of characters that may futher incite the imagination of the reader. It is truly enticing to partake of such a well thought out tale with top quality grammer and an author who has a zest to keep it fresh in the minds of their readers.
  • RhawkasRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I've quite enjoyed the story so far (all of arc 1 (the first 100 chapters) as of the writing of this review) and binged it over the course of a few days. Will try not to have any spoilers in this review.
    The story has nice, short chapters that go by pretty quick. Grammar errors are minimal at best ( think I only saw a couple typos) and the story is easy to read. It's a bit light on the litRPG elements (nothing like stats, hit points, etc), but it works. People looking for a litRPG with all the crunchy RPG and game elements will likely be disappointed.
    The main characters are well defined and the reader can get a good feel for what kind of people they are.
    The monster evolution aspect is done well enough, though the cover art kind of spoils some of the drama that the protagonist feels that otherwise could have been a concern for the reader as well. They also progress through the evolutions at an almost breakneck pace.
    The story description is accurate, even if some elements haven't fully come into play yet.
    For me, the only con is (and I know this is kinda petty) that this particular flavor of arachne isn't my favorite.
    All in all, if this sounds like a story you'd be interested in reading from its description, go for it.