The Journey of a God: Book 1

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Description

When a young man suddenly becomes one of the strongest beings in existence, his life takes a drastic turn. He must learn the true essence of right and wrong in this epic tale of adventure, heartbreak, and action across dimensions. Will he find his place in the world or will it be chosen for him?

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Status: Hiatus
Year: 2021
Author: DragonHolyVoid

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Rating: 3.7/ 5.0
Followers: 7
Views: 4,717

Chapters(18 total)

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★★★ 3.0
The premise seemed promising on paper, but the level of suspension of disbelief needed to swallow this is just too much. Nothing is explained or properly described. It happens even with seemingly "normal" settings. Basically the story is not solid. It does not flow, the reader does not feel immersed in it.
For example, there is no explanation or description about the world where the MC lives. There is no character development at all before shit hits the fan, thus it feels like a 3rd person narration, even when it is not. it seems like many people on the MC's world can do extraordinary stuff, but nothing is explained in that regard.
For example, talking animals means conciousness, which already implies huge differences in how the environment works!
The writing style is not good. The story does not flow, and scenes feel confusing, which compounds some settings that can be already confusing.
Characters are.... okay, the best part besides grammar really. They don't feel truly alive, but could get there with a rewrite. It is not easy to write about OP characters, especially if one wants them to feel human or relatable.
If you like OP characters, and can get past the writing, then this work may be for you....
Otherwise I can't in good faith recommend this work.
Note: Maybe the newer chapters are better, but I could not get there.