The Iron Veil
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Author's note:
The following is the first 21 chapters of THE IRON VEIL (approximately 50K words). To purchase the complete novel, please visit:https://amzn.to/2IVwHJZ
To get a free OmniWorld short story (which you should only readaftercompleting The Iron Veil to avoid spoilers), please visit:http://www.randynargi.com/the-iron-veil/
It’s not a game. It’s a nightmare.
25 year-old Justin Boone has been waiting his entire life for an adventure like this.
Breakthrough technology developed at a government sleep study program allows participants to interact with each other in the OmniWorld, a shared dream state that resembles an online role-playing game.
2.3 million people applied to participate in the first public test. 5000 were chosen. And Justin is one of them.
But he soon finds that he’s not one of the lucky ones. Not by a long shot.
Information
- Status
- Ongoing
- Year
- 2018
- Author
- Randy
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- Rating
- 3.8/ 5.0
- Followers
- 54
- Views
- 38,907
Chapters(23 total)
- Bonus Short StoryApr 9, 2018
- Chapter 21Mar 1, 2018
- Chapter 20Feb 26, 2018
- Chapter 19Feb 23, 2018
- Chapter 18Feb 23, 2018
- Chapter 17Feb 23, 2018
- Chapter 16Feb 19, 2018
- Chapter 15Feb 15, 2018
- Chapter 14Feb 15, 2018
- Chapter 13Feb 11, 2018
- Chapter 12Feb 8, 2018
- Chapter 11Feb 5, 2018
- Chapter 10Jan 31, 2018
- Chapter 9Jan 31, 2018
- Chapter 8Jan 31, 2018
- Chapter 7Jan 26, 2018
- Chapter 6Jan 22, 2018
- Chapter 5Jan 18, 2018
- Chapter 4Jan 18, 2018
- Chapter 3Jan 14, 2018
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Community Reviews(2)
- ZedredRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5The story itself isn't something new, yet however it isn't the same as the other of it's genre.
Justin is a guy that like many others has the luck to be chosen to play the game early with other people, however he isn't trapped in there like Sao or is he reincarnated and knows everything, however the story manages to keep you hooked thanks to the plot in the background.
The characters aren't just there for the mc and nothing more they have their own motives, and the even the MC had some character growth in the latest chapters
I haven't seen any grammar errors, and if I had they weren't too bad.
All in all, It's an interesting Story with great potential to become one of the best, at least in my opinion. - quiksilver201Royal Road★★ 2.0I did not get very far but the mc is extremely rude to everyone he comes across. Prick just isn't my flavor of protagonist.