The Incursion - Rise of a Magus
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
When the universe is invaded via Earth, the guardians that be decide the best way to allow humanity to fight back is access to the foreign magic by game like interface. Follow Leon as he strives to survive as a Mage in this new world. --- PLEASE RATE AND REVIEW. I didn't realize how important that was until I started writing this. Made me go and rate every story I've read on this site
Editing, spell and grammar checking, wow this is so embarrasing, so many mistakes, I'm alone and straight up blushing right now.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2016
- Author
- Wolfson
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.3/ 5.0
- Followers
- 323
- Views
- 119,676
Chapters(21 total)
- Ch 20 - Special move - HeartbreakerApr 2, 2016
- Ch 19 - The GauntletMar 15, 2016
- Ch. 18 - Close CombatMar 8, 2016
- Ch. 17 - Over the riverFeb 29, 2016
- Ch 16. - Third personFeb 22, 2016
- Ch. 15 - The Tall GrassFeb 21, 2016
- Ch. 14 - Level GrindFeb 18, 2016
- Ch. 13 - HotfixFeb 16, 2016
- Ch 12 - Noob VillageFeb 15, 2016
- Ch. 11 - Escort MissionFeb 13, 2016
- Glossary of sorts (Possible spoilers)Feb 10, 2016
- Ch 10. - Patch 1.01Feb 10, 2016
- Ch 9 - Roll for InitiativeFeb 9, 2016
- ch.8 - Dungeon CrawlFeb 5, 2016
- Ch. 7 - Looking for Group (18+)Feb 2, 2016
- Ch 6-Random encounterFeb 1, 2016
- Ch 5 - The TutorialJan 31, 2016
- Ch 4 - Character CreationJan 30, 2016
- Dying sensationJan 29, 2016
- Day oneJan 28, 2016
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Community Reviews(5)
- WolfsonRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0My thoughts on my own story. I’m going to worry a lot less about grammar and spelling after the 5th chapter in order to write faster and move the plot along. I’m not a pro this is just for fun, right?
I think it’s a solid four compared to many of the stories I’v read on this site, I put 5 because I don't hate myself thank you :P. But I’m interested in you thoughts.
How do I make this better?? - kkile57Royal Road★★★★★ 5.0the realness of how every character acts really gets me hooked onto the story
- Quartz RingRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0Please keep up the excellent work. Its hard for me to get into a contemperary litrpg but I really enjoyed the realistic viewpoints of your characters and their reactions to the world. I can only hope you come back to finish
- zakripngRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0Grammar errors are negligible. The blue boxes are amazing. Does the MC have a prospect as a tanker despite being a Mage??? Though it would be super amazing if he can. The dialogues need to distinguished further.
- SamhainRoyal Road★★ 2.0The concept of the story is quite good
But I would have to say I am F***ing sick of pussy ass scared of everything weak-willed gutless pathatic losers of MCs…. And he's f***ing stupid....