The Incarnation Cycle [Indefinite HIATUS!]

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A new life, a new world, and a little bit of magic. Nat is reincarnated into a new world as a baby cat-girl after an incident on a plane, follow her as she grows up and explores this new world. This is going to be a long-running series that I have some plan for but will be mostly discovery writing.Chapter Titles - Each chapter is titled By chapter number then whos POV it's from then the chapter title, here's an example.Chapter 1: Fitz - Reborn AgainAuthors Notes: This is my first ever work of fiction so any advice and critique are welcome. If you see any grammatical errors feel free to tell me in the comments and I'll try my best to fix them in a timely manner. Any advice on how I can improve is also welcome. Lastly, my main goal in writing is to hopefully bring all of you a story you can lose yourself in and forget about your worries in the real world so, I hope you enjoy!

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Status: Hiatus
Year: 2021
Author: FictionalOne

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.3/ 5.0
Followers: 11
Views: 3,984

Chapters(10 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

eric_riverRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
A Short Review to Chapter Two
If you like getting summoned to a new world by magic
I think that you'll like this story, so check it out real quick
the pacing and the premise are solid without a doubt
I’ll update this later when more chapters have come out
luda305Royal Road
★★★ 3.0
This one is a bit of a mixed bag. A really strong start that quickly spirals out of control. While I get that the fiction is mostly discovery writing, there's a lack of attention to detail that really trips up the story.
Let's start with the good. Chapter 1 is fantastic. One of the best on the site. A very novel approach to the isekai question. And, chapter 2 a good follow up for the baby reincarnation point.
Then, the bad. First, Nora's character is all over the place and the audience can seem to pin down what she's like. I'd say that her character is whatever the author needs it to be, because if it's just a matter of a developing personality while growing up, then the time skips just aren't being handled well. Second, the children in this world are fearless or heedless. It's bizarre. Almost, but not quite, xianxia-level tropey. Third, there seem to be a lot of abandoned world building threads. The typical pattern in a fantasy novel is that a new element is introduced, it gets explored a fair bit, but not completely, but enough that the audience is satisfied that they have a good grip on the new element. That doesn't happen here. Repeatedly, something new is introduced, it is used to push the characters into a specific direction for the plot, but then it's never really explained and we never come back to it. It's frustrating and makes the world seem really thin (which is a shame, because there's a lot of really interesting aspects alluded to). Finally, and potentially related to most of the above, there seem to be a lot of discontinuities or inconsistencies.