The Immortal Mortal
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Ray Black is just a regular college student. On a school trip abroad, a terrifying incident occurs during their plane flight. Ray Black, finds himself in a cultivation world with the mortal cultivation talent of Earthlings but an undying body. How will Ray, a standard guy from Earth, handle his inability to die while those around him can?
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- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2021
- Author
- TrashyWriter
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- Rating
- 4.4/ 5.0
- Followers
- 53
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- 9,757
Chapters(9 total)
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Community Reviews(2)
- Jack12Royal Road★★★★★ 5.0This contain a LOT of POTENTIAL very part is well conected, the MC talent is explain, the tool and knowledge had been provided in a reasonable way, unlike other novel where the just throw thing in and leave it there
Anyway u are doing great so far. The only thing that i think need to improve is that how the character dialogue is group, some of the dialogue is too long
For example
Ray’s mom walked over and rubbed his head, snapping his attention back, before slowly and patiently saying, “Hey little Jay. You probably won’t understand this but as your mom I feel the need to explain it so nothing is hidden, naturally I’ll reexplain when you’re older. You successfully cultivating at your age just shows how awesome you are but we don’t wish for you to hurt yourself. If you reach Meridian Opening before sixteen years old your ability to cultivate will be ruined and your life shortened… Cultivation can’t be sealed before the Meridian Opening Realm so our only option is to do this. A cultivator can form a soul connection with a single beast throughout their lives, including spirit beasts. There is a spirit beast called a Parasitic Core. Parasitic Core’s are rare, naturally formed spirit beasts which enter a beast's body and survive by absorbing half of the beasts absorbed energy. If a human forms a soul connection with it then it’s absorbed into their dantian and absorbs half of the humans cultivation as they cultivate resulting in it always maintaining the same cultivation level as it’s human partner. Interestingly, if a human forms a soul connection with a spirit beast then that beast will be mutated to have a similar mutation to anything unique about the human soul like an affinity to a certain element. The benefit of this spirit beast is that the absorbed energy forms a solid core body around it that the human can draw from similar to their own core when they form their own core. Basically giving them twice the energy as someone at a similar level. The problems with this - Terry25888Royal Road★★★★★ 4.5This story seems to be well thought out. And I'm excited to see how this works with the potential he has. Sure it says he's has crap potential right now. but who else would be able to break their cultivation and start completely over to a way that fits them over and over again. Then there's potential in the indestructible body he'll have as what better way than to force possibly unstable or opposing forces of energy together.