The Ice Magician

Self-Published

Description

[Hello Subject N° 5.384.024.879.652.512 Welcome to Alquadia]

This is the story of Matteo Oronis, an ordinary student from Earth, like all the humanity have been teleported into another dimension

The “ voice “ keep giving us missions,Us, Human have our lives in the lines

But for what ? what is the purpose of the missions ? When will it end ? Could we return to earth ? Besides Humans…Who might be the others Subject ?

This is my first time editing a novel, besides my natural language is french.

I Hope you'll enjoy my story, as if you don't or even if you do and have something to say feel free to say it

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EolymerRoyal Road
★ 0.5
The author doesn't have a good grasp of writing and english in general. The story doesn't flow well at all, there is no sense of character development. There is also a lack of spell check and grammar. There are no descriptions about any characters or backgrounds. The conversation between the three people in the prologue was super awkward and made no logical sense. No one would converse like that in real life. I expected more details about the main character before he was transported but the story just jumps right in and doesn't allow for any character nor world building.