The Howling Dust

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Description

Gordon was a simple boy, one day he goes to the forest and got lost. He eats forbidden fruit and got tangled with powerful creature that curse him, he thought he would die there but he got a power instead, an amazing power or maybe a terrible curse.

Follow his journey to unravell the mystery of his power on his everyday life.

There is no status screen in this story, MC would need to do it the old way.

Update would be twice a week in any day when i have the time

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2025
Author: burdi99

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 2.8/ 5.0
Followers: 4
Views: 1,594

Chapters(19 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

CharlyHaRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
I think this story has great potential, but needs to be filled up with further details to make it a whole.
Every chapter by itself is nicely written but sometimes the coherent flow is missing, leaving the reader confused about how the heck something happened.
I guess if you correct those flaws it will be a pleasure to read.
Your main character is nicely written, but the changes in character are happening too fast, one can't follow.
Your world building is really nicely done in its main concepts and ideas, but you are not working out the concept but keep them superficial.
All in all a nice story, that has surely the potential for a ✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️ rating but needs some work. Right now ✴️✴️✴️and a half is all I can do.