The Housewife is an Immortal Cultivator
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The daily life of a housewife waiting for her beloved husband to come home from work, but this housewife is a bit different...
After all, she is an Immortal Cultivator.
A slice of life book about the odd couple and the random interesting bits in their lives!
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- Hiatus
- Author
- catofdreams
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- 4.2/ 5.0
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- jadecriminalRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5TLDR: 3.5 points for making me chuckle out loud once.
An amusing premise. Ocassinally funny but it doesn't keep you interested.
1. The one punch woman trick only takes it so far.
2. The relationship isn't.
-Getting married on the same day you meet? It might work as a premise but only if that's the main part of the story, IE how two strangers come together after a whirlwind marriage.
-For best results the married couple should know each other.
-casually mindcontrolling your future husband is unethical. Actually casual mindcontroll in general is unethical.
It's a bit hard to stay involved witht he characters after a chapter or three since we don't really know a lot about them and their lives. (Becauee we don't see the romance. I like the idea of introducng their past in flashbacks but it's too rushed of a romance. )
I give it a little slack in that a cultivator might be a bit extreme, simply because they have the drive to reach their goal. So beeing a "perfectly normal housewife" would just naturally be something one might stubbornly strive for.
But we don't really get to know them as people.
The reveal... In my opinion having the "secret one punch woman" to be part of a hilarious courting and then a second season be "my wife is an epic cultivator" might have more staying power.