The Hero of Destiny is a Girl Now?
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The Prophecy foretold of a destined child - one who would bring an end to the Dark Lord's evil reign and usher in a new Era of Light. That child was Ariz Vidane. Fulfilling his destiny was supposed to come at the cost of his life, but Ariz managed to subvert his ultimate fate.
...And in quite a creative fashion.
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- Hiatus
- Author
- HomerunMikey
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- 4.3/ 5.0
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- 241
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Community Reviews(3)
- Night_Shade0611Royal Road★★★★★ 5.0Spoiler:
I like how the hero just shrugs off how his gender changes and treats the day after like any other day. The backstory of how Oz and Ariz finally meet and how the psychological development of how Ariz's grandad shows how some things work in reality. I also like how he just uses a small spell to fix one part of the statue when Oz is looking at the statue then explains his situation like it was nothing, meanwhile Oz is blown outta his mind. - CalaventeRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5Interesting premises.
We got a MC that is OP... and Gender-bent, but the story seems to leave the slice-of-life we might have expected and implies future "not-so-easy-action".
The characters we met are already growing on me (even the one we only see quickly).
I hope there'll be a little bit of sexy time, but in fact the story doesn't really need it.
a few typos here and there. - OdenTheTastyRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5Good stuff. (Read up to ch. 14 latest update) No spoilers here.
Style Score: It hits the sweat spot of being a comedy and adventure while not being ridiculous or immersion breaking.
Story score: so far no plot holes that I can see. The title is and summary seem a little off since they don't really convey that the gender swap hasn't really changed anything (so far) outside of a couple gags. I kept a 5 star tho cause so far there's only 14 chapters and the main character hasn't started his main quest. But so far the story feels alive as the main character is dragged into things that arnt directly related to him by his friend Lana. Its not all centered on him which makes this comedy adventure a lot more fun watching the main cast interact with the world and their mission as people who already saved the world but still not over bearing strong. There is a little bit of plot armor going on as sometimes as some of the main cast get bailed out of a bad situation by luck. But this luck has also happened to the first main bad guy so it equalizes out.
Grammar: every other chapter you come across has a one or two broken sentences but you can still read the story just fine and it doesn't really bother you. Almost as well written grammatically as the top stories on here.
Character Score: so far all the characters are fantastic and you can really see their different personalities. Very well written except for the first main baddy. She's fine in all aspects except her origin. It feels like the author needed a quick villain and threw her in since she has no real relation to the main cast so I don't feel emotionally invested in what she does. But she's still well written and consistent with what we do get out of her origin and personality.
Overall this story is definitely something to follow. I hope you finish this! Good luck!