The Harukian Chronicler

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2021

Author

ZeriqHaruk

• -ReWrite up and good-
  Jul 21, 2021
• -ReWrite in Submission-
  Jul 20, 2021

Reviews

Community Reviews(10)

• OninomadRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Something to bear in mind when you read the more negative reviews of this story, as of writing this(chapter 26) the MC is 5 years old. The world rules on aging haven't been explained well but it's very clear at least the races present in the story don't age the same as humans (the MC is almost 5' tall), he's still only had 5 years in the world and most of that time he's focused on his family.
• TinyesTimRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  So far I am liking it alot.
  Glad it isn't on hiatus.
• Crazy117Royal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Interesting read no massive grammar issues. But I want to point out something that most of the rest of the reviewers seem to have missed.
  Warning Spoilers Ahead!
  The Author tells us in the first few chapters that the “New” World the mc is going to is by a massive amount Older than Earth. It’s also the original world that the mc lived on in his first incarnation before an idiot of a case worker decided to move him to earth.
  Another thing the author tells us in the fist few chapters is that children with magical heritages grow up faster this implies that hormones happen at an earlier age hence relationships at 8-9 and other things like the fact that they sign up at the adventurers guild at 5 years old because in the author’s world 5 years old for the magical races is more like 10+ for the races with less magic. And another thing about the adventurers guild it is stated that the children that sign up early will be limited in there quest taking abilities till they are older/more capable by locking them into the lowest rank for a while signing up early is like Boyscouts for us but more free form so the children can learn responsibly and earn pocket money for themselves.
  lastly the story doesn’t have an overarching goal yet except for one “Protect my Family” that’s the only true goal that’s implied other than learning to craft and fight. The mc also makes many plans that are only hinted at in the story and never fleshed out so that means there may be many long term goals we have yet to learn about and it’s just that we are seeing just his short term goals.
• MurphysLawRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  After all the novels I've read, on here and as books; it's rare to find one thats refreshing and wholesome without being boring.  Greatly looking forward for more. Minor issues with spelling that will bother some nazi's.
• SandsforeverRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  Ch.20 (edit: very chill read been pretty slow so far)
  Pretty good read so far some grammer spelling errors broke my immersion but not to many (its not atrocious)
  Writing style is ok premise is the normal reincarnation story start(killed by insert truck chan or crazy person here) pretty good reincarnation story so far i wonder how much the start matters (I guess we will find out as the story goes on)
  Not really enough content yet to say if the characters are going to develop and grow
  I dont know how OP mc is gonna get but let's find out together
  tldr if you like slice of life worth at try
• TinyBookDragonRoyal Road

  ★★★ 3.0

  Super OP MC and the author repeats the phrase "as if he was coming home" enough times to be annoying. Other than that I enjoy it well enough and will continue following along.
  *I generally don't think too hard when reading stories b/c it's easier to enjoy them that way rather than picking them apart, so take this review as you will.
• BioniclegeniusRoyal Road

  ★★★ 2.5

  This was a weird one to read. The biggest problem was that the quality of the writing just steadily drops through each chapter, until I gave up at 23 because it was nearly unreadable. The author has a very poor grasp of ages, as mentioned in other reviews. There are a lot of internal inconsistencies in how things work. It's directly enough, and it feels almost like we're starting to get to the beginning of maybe having some form of plot, but it's not really there, and with the writing quality actually dropping as we go along, I'm not sure I could sit through that slow development.
  The lesbian relationship feels extremely shoehorned in, like a "just because I want it to happen" note from the author, rather than something natural stemming from the story. Out of nowhere, we get a paragraph explaining how the parents approve of LGBT relationships, completely unprompted, with a hit-you-over-the-head "why would they say that? Well, because this girl (who is 9 years old) is in love with this other girl her age and wants to get married!" The entire thing makes the writing feel like it's got some unfortunately strong pedophiliac vibes in it, along with several other instances put in here and there.
  We've got an arbitrary fourth-wall-breaking character who won't tell us who they are. The bad puncutation and grammar and occasional typos strongly detract from the readability and immersion of the piece. I get what the author is going for, but the execution is sub-par enough that much of this probably needs to be rewritten to be able to maintain much interest. As this is in its current form, I can't really recommend it to anybody.
• oisnotRoyal Road

  ★★ 2.0

  The intro is really really boring. Perhaps the story is good if you just jump directly to chapter 3. But I couldn't finish chapter 2. So boring.
• SevenShadeRoyal Road

  ★★ 2.0

  It should be an OP Lucky choices of Combination... buts since the author though that its TOO OP, thats why he makes the MC act like an idiotic asshole.... and that is chapter 5..
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  Seeing as how this is the only result from the Query, I guess there is no actual Grandmaster grade for Crafting; and honestly, I am getting tired of looking through this database for something. I’ll go with this then, clicking the accept button so I can finish with my ‘Gift’ and move on with my ‘Curse’, moving on to look at the database for the curse function…
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  And then ....
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  …the fuck am I doing? I must be tired as all fuck if I even think that secondary one is feasible. Clicking the first curse, since there is something off about me, I just decide that everything is done here.
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  With these alone i knew that this novel is not worth my time BUT ! If u want a quick read of boring stuff then go ahead...
• AkashaRoyal Road

  ★★ 2.0

  The story started well but it quickly degraded.
  I would say the biggest flaw of the story is that it is not sure of what it wants to be. It focuses too much on the system but it tries to be slice of life. The MC is OP just because, it does not feel earned and the story goes great leghts on detailing that part.
  I hope that the author will continue with writting with more focus on the characters in the future.