The Guardian's Apprentice
Self-Published
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Description
A land struck by drought, famine and death. A garden of hope withering to nothing. Reviving the land will cost everything.
Information
- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2025
- Author
- feyflowerstories
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Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 2.8/ 5.0
- Followers
- 1
- Views
- 495
Chapters(4 total)
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Community Reviews(2)
- RznRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5This short story sets the stage somewhat quickly and then dwells on the nature of the man in the garden and the garden itself, all while lightly going over reasons for the problems and not actually putting them to words. The MC should be aware, the reader should be made aware, of exactly what those issues are. As it stands, right now the piece concludes without explaining anything and it just relies on vibes. That alone doesn't give enough context. What are they going to do, for war, for disease, what magic? This is too vague for me to understand.
- betruethisdayRoyal Road★★ 2.0The descriptions are very captivating, but I have no idea what has happened to this world. Why are there dead people? Why are the buildings falling apart? What is the heroin trying to achieve by going to the garden? Who is that man? What does the garden do? I don’t have a single answer only questions.