THE GREY SERIES
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Sorry Guys. This story was a story to learn from. And I learned a lot but it had to be removed to reposted again with better potential.
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- Status
- Hiatus
- Author
- Mr.sunny
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Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.8/ 5.0
- Followers
- 189
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Community Reviews(3)
- Yaaw313Royal Road★★★★★ 5.0This story is unique and creepy. I want to to know many things already.
I love the magic system and the built of the world. Walking mushrooms and talking trees are things I loved to see.
The grammar is good and the style is simple, not that great, but still conveying enough for me.
I just can't wait to see the end of plot threads the author had implanted up to now - MoonlightGardensRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5A story with a lot of potential, but could potentially benefit from a couple of edits. The story and worldbuilding are interesting, albeit confusing at times. My only complaint about the characters is that many of them—despite being children—don’t really act like kids. The prose keeps me just outside of truly enjoying the story. The prologue is a shaky start, it somewhat improves with the first chapter, but stagnates from there. Some sentences don’t quite flow together, though the grammar is fine. Still, I think it’s something that might be worth keeping an eye out for.
- usernames are annoyingRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0I like the story so far. I like how the magic system works and all the other stuff. The only thing I don't like is that there's a bit too much inappropriate stuff when the main character is a child. Nudity is sometimes mentioned and the main character is like around 10-12 so it would be better in my opinion if there was none of that.