The Greatest Gene
Self-Published
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Description
The future has dawned upon man kind. The universe that was once a vast unexplored land has now instead become a place where dreams are fufilled.Youths across the massive stretches of space look up towards the sky in hopes of one day being among the many who roam across the galaxy.This is the story of a young man, who looked up towards the stars and decided that he would become the greatest of them all.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2019
- Author
- OmniverseSage
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.2/ 5.0
- Followers
- 124
- Views
- 73,989
Chapters(72 total)
- The Science Behind GenesOct 25, 2019
- Talent/Combat ExamOct 25, 2019
- Divine Perception PlanetOct 25, 2019
- Cain's Overwhelming PowerOct 25, 2019
- Aquiring The Time Skip GeneOct 25, 2019
- Time Skip GeneOct 25, 2019
- Snake ManOct 25, 2019
- Last TwoOct 25, 2019
- Supreme Gene Simulating ElixirOct 25, 2019
- Dangerous BattleOct 25, 2019
- Divine Perception SectOct 25, 2019
- Many ImprovementsOct 25, 2019
- Flaming Steelback RhinoOct 25, 2019
- Multi-Instant Stop GeneOct 25, 2019
- Fighting Hotch AgainOct 25, 2019
- Single Instant Stop GeneOct 25, 2019
- A-RankOct 25, 2019
- End Of Year ExamOct 25, 2019
- Bless YouOct 25, 2019
- Golden Goose Material StoreOct 25, 2019
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Community Reviews(2)
- ZekRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0While it shares some similarities with other books of the same sci-fi gene evolution genre it really develops its own identity as the story grows by combining traditional cultivation-esk rankings and groups to a multiversal sci-fi world. Really loving it.
- CatVIRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5Maybe cause the author used to host this on qidian, but the grammar is really... bad.
Not unreadable bad, but for a native english speaker it rather as well be.
The most glaring flaw is how the tense switches from past to present to past again constantly.
Just stick with past, man. I understand that was your intention BUT you keep putting present tense in there.
I would suggest the author to read over what he writes at least twice. These are mistakes easily fixable. Like this one for example,
"Schools now focused completely on training youth to become Genetic Warriors, as long as you could become one of your grades were irrelevant." - Remove the of after the one.
Character and style score both suffered as a result of grammar as the bad wordings make everything the mc say sound cringey, and story telling becomes hard to immerse in.
There are also instances like this in chapter 1,
First the author writes, "He refused to fail however, his will had already become unbreakable due to all the failures he had gone through."
One paragraph later he writes, "However after a full day of trying, he gave up."
The author seemed to have meant he gave up trying, for that particular time, as it was also mentioned his body was out of fuel. But the wording is just so contradictory, you can't help but wonder if the whole story is gonna be like that too.
Use something like, "However after a full day of trying, he took a break." OR "He stopped for a breather." or something similar. "Gave up" and " Unbreakable will" should not be used for the same person so arbritrarily. Broke any immersion I had.
I will update my review if the author decides to edit this, accordingly.