The Grandmaster of Magic and Alchemy[Discontinue- Rewritten Version will be up soon]

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Description

Do you believe in reincarnation? Well, I don't. Why? Because to reincarnate, you must die first.

But then, if you didn't die but just suddenly vanished and replace someone else's life? What does this call?

This is the story of a woman who lives for so long that she had wished she could just die already, only to mistake the spell [Soul Incarnation] as a spell that could kill her. Instead, her soul and memory were sent into another world that looked down on the weak and the strong walk toward the path of righteous.

Her name... is... was... called Megie, the Immortal Grandmaster Magician of Kingdom of Magic. And now, her soul is in the body of a girl who accidentally poisoned herself to death. Her name is called Jenna Loveheart. Now... what will you do, Megie? No, Jenna?

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2017
Author
Lunnear

Tags

ACTIONFANTASYADVENTUREMAGICFEMALE LEADSUPERNATURALMARTIAL ARTSROMANCE SUBPLOTSTRONG LEADREINCARNATION

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.0/ 5.0
Followers
470
Views
40,072

Chapters(12 total)

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Community Reviews(10)

  • Elina VioletsRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    It's pretty awesome, so please continue it :D
    I found it pretty interesting about the age stuff and like the idea of the main character being more of a motherly-figure then a confused and power-seeking heroine. The plant science is very intruging too
    So please continue it :3
  • OverLordMasterRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Could you please update, Im going to die of desperation
  • susanoreaperRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Love it  MC is OP,  is very intelligent compared to other people in story.
    crafting is involved !!  magic ,monsters, good story building what do you want more ?!!
  • taylor9944Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    If you love a good reincarnation story with a OP mc then you will like this. The mc isnt only strong she is smart too taking all the 5000 years of knowledge and helping out those close to her, but she can also be cold and merciless.
  • cocoomaRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    I have to say that I really like this one, for one thing, its not like any other story on this site :) we have atleast 2 characters that is quite op I guess would be the word, but they care about people and dont want to stand out. And that in it self is really rare. Not the best grammar, but sertainly not that bad either. I am curious to see where it is going, so keep up the good work :)
  • obsessed87Royal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    Ok, this is cool.
    The story line is awesome and is really well thought out, a little tweaking to some of the writing would have it flow better.
    But great job and can't wait for more.
    (^.^)
  • ElyasRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    9 chapters in
    The good: Interesting premise, good characters, finally a romance without all the characters acting like 10 year olds that are too shy to even hold hands.
    The bad: Early chapters have terrible grammar so it's difficult to get past that, waaaaaaaay too much time is spent writing about how amazed everyone is at how awesome everything she does is and how terrible everything everyone else does is.
    Overall i think this will be a great novel when more chapters come out and hopefully the author improves even more than he already has. And I think if my last point is improved upon this will be a 4.5/5 because imo that is the main flaw atm. It gets better when you learn what text you should skip like how she is brilliant at making clothes, soap etc and how the alchemy of this world sucks and when the author explains how 10 different elixirs nobody cares about work.
  • KK2Royal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    There are a lot of really awesome ideas in this story but the writing is just too…chaotic. The whole thing reads like a machine assisted translation, and the MC keeps throwing in tons of new background information from her past life when anything happens in a very casual way, so there’s a ton of exposition that sometimes destroys the pace of the story, then it just stops and leaves you thinking “wait, what hell just happened?”. Author seems to lack a sense of scale sometimes, as power levels, amount of money, distances, and timescales are thrown around left and right with little care.
    MC is quite awesome though and makes you want to keep reading just to find out how awesome she can be.
  • fanvaronRoyal Road
    ★★★ 2.5
    The story idea is pretty good nothing really innovative. But there are more than enough stories that use old concepts and make a good read.
    Unfortunately, this is not one of those, the grammar is very bad with errors in basically every sentence. The writing style is not very good as well with many badly structured sentences, repeating the same word several times. The POV is just all over the place with third and first person in the same sentence.
    In general, the use of numbers and reactions is way over the top, with billions and trillions of years and thousands and millions all over the place, also everything the MC does makes people faint and cough up blood, even if it is so great this is not a very good way to communicate that.
    And lastly, there is very much repetition in terms of content and knowledge, like how often we get told that she is billions of years old but stopped counting after 5123.
    All in all, this is just not a very good story the idea behind it is not bad, but it is just not that great that it can overcome all the other flaws.
    PS. the rewrite of the first chapter did in no way increase the quality of grammar, which is unfortunate, otherwise I might just have recommended waiting for the other rewrites
  • neverdyingRoyal Road
    ★ 1.0
    The title says it all, really. I'm a fan of reincarnation stories and this seemed like a good find. Unfortunately, the grammar and spelling are so atrocious that the story is incomprehensible.