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imlmendezRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
The general story-line is good, but it would be great if you can gave more details about aspects like the demon lord, his sister and jerk boyfriend etc..or the bullyes, the MC should want revenge or forget abuot these things but actually does nor of them
aattssRoyal Road
★★ 2.0
First off, handsome asshole bullies are sort of overused. Oh, and the MC isn't really interesting either. I mean, the first chapter tells us he's fat, and supposedly bullied. But it's sort of pointless to have the MC be bullied in the first chapter when it isn't relevant to absolutely anything, not even the MC, in the later chapters.
Things like "hourglass body" aren't interesting character traits. Though it might count as a sign of the writer's preferences.
I feel like pointing out that lifespans that normally increase proportionally to power/training is something that comes from Wuxia fic. Though it doesn't really matter since the plot probably isn't going to go much beyond the 50 years other than the epilogue, so it's just a matter of the author wanting the protagonist to live forever.
Wait. Are the characters supposed to be actual famous people? You know, instead of taking names from celeberties and assigning them to OCs, you could find a random name generator or something and come up with your own.