The Goblin And The Duke's Daughter
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Description
"So, you're the new toy father brought me? Father did well… he knows I am a sucker for pretty faces."
The daughter of the Duke just received a new pet for her twenty second birthday,a goblin.The lady is in need of finding a husband and soon. The goblin adjusts to its new life and all the chaos he brings for the lady and her home.
Everything is about to change for both of them and all the people in their lives, for better or worse. The servants are on edge. The lady finds her new petadorable. The eyes of the royal crown shift to gaze upon this little weed growing up in one of their most promising flower beds.
The wheels of fate are turning and one little goblin is at the center of it all.
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- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2025
- Author
- storytimewithA
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Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 3
- Views
- 1,444
Chapters(8 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- Book Of SongsRoyal Road★★★ 3.0I know it's pretty early on to be saying something. However, I noticed something, and I just wanted to point it out early to try and help. I was reading another story earlier and it felt mechanical... my advice was to try to breath more life into it and I feel like this writing style is aiming towards that. However,... this writing style does come across as a little lacking for my taste. Obviously, I don't speak for the masses and you can ignore this review. However I would like to advise that you practice and work more on your writing style.
Aside from the writing style I do like the dialogue. It's too early to judge the plot. The characters themselves are decent. I like the little goblin. I feel like you should work more on the lady. I'll come back to review this again eventually. Good luck and keep on writing!